Is this story still continuing?

Please upload next chapter

Next chapter..

more please

Her not his. Use proper gender pronouns

Please work on your grammar a little, and get a beta. It's not unreadable, just very confusing to read at times.

At least you're honest, lol. I'll hold my judgement till at least the next chapter though

You write in a somewhat backwards way and end up with the wrong meaning to your words a lot in this chapter. Just saying.

Good so far, I look forward to reading more in the future.

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bro, this is extremely good story, but you are severe lacking in actual Jeanne and Sieg development and their screen time together. I get the who background story but you are making it way too long

Oh, and stop with the opening/ending song thing. Nobody likes story padding, even if it's a (cue opening/ending song) and it just doesn't work.

...Seriously? Why is it what every time I read a DxD fic that spares any of the four in the Fallen Angel arc, it's almost always Raynare and Kalawarner who get spared? Why is it almost always Dohnaseek and Mittelt who get killed? Is it because Raynare and Kalawarner are women with large breasts and Dohnaseek and Mittelt aren't?

Scathach who can won against divine spirits lose to two kids?
I see a dxd fanboyism here in play. What you just did is humiliate scathach by two kids whose only power is one dimensional?

Stop writing before you piss the whole Fate Fandom

Yes shame you didn't kill Sirzechs and Serafall devils are truly unneeded. The DxD aren't even cool like the ones in Fate and they are only pillars