This is not good enough to close the story, since the wedding ceremony should be 'on screen'.
Also, all sex scenes were luscious and lemony (very pleasing to me) although I am not a fan of anal sex.

I wonder where the destination is, and whether Peach will ever return to the Mushroom Kingdom.
Wait, what is happening with the other 6 koopalings (all male)?

At last, Rosalina enters the stage! Thank you very much!

I previously thought that Mona did not actually truly like Wario.

Looks like Paper Mario world and the real world 'collided' here, since Vivian appears in Paper Mario the Thousand Year Door.
Wait, did you know that Vivian is actually a dude (guy)?!

By any means, is Birdo's another (full) name Catherine?
(In Korea he/she/it is called Catherine.)

:O Wendy got raped :O
(I wonder why she was bombing Peach's cart instead of managing her hamburger shop though)

ALL chapters are very lemony and well-written.
Although I am not a fan of anal sex.

Will Rosalina (my favourite princess) join this fun later on?
(Note: 1st: Rosalina, 2nd: Daisy, 3rd: Peach - my order of preference. The reason why Peach is 3rd is because of Super Mario Odyssey's ending.)

Of course Peach will never get 'bored' with all these activities going on.

Better than "good enough;" this was glorious.

Actually, I like that you brought up the whole trans issue. It's honestly getting a bit disturbing to see how quick some people are to alienate transgender people. Just yesterday I was reading a "feminist" article that tried to demonize trans-women as a brand of misogyny by comparing Sam Smith to victims of forced abortions and super-imposed natural childbirth. It was really disheartening, seeing both transgender get attacked for identifying as another gender and the true victims of misogyny get marginalized as part of an anti-trans movement.

Yoshi actually has a name- T. Yoshisaur Munchakoopas.

It's a legit thing, look it up.

That was a great finale and I think you should do a Luigi Mansion type story.

This was pretty cool but i feel that maybe there should of been chapters between bowser's kidnapping and peach's rescue. maybe intoduce some common enemies to join peach along the way.