Looking forward to next chapter

Damn, this is amazing! I need to read more!

I am mcloving this I hope you make more

Oh wow this guy’s an ass, I like him.

okay I will make this easy hasn't trained as a warrior gets into a fight freezes immediately and is killed

not gonna lie it's funny ;p Hopefully longer chapters though ;p

Mc just keeps clinging to the idiot ball, one fuck up after another

Marvelous Chapter!
Your writing is superb!
I'm so excited to continue reading!
Thanks a lot for it!

I hope despite going with Ralof he doesnt actually join the stormcloacks considering what a huge racist and idiot Ulfrick is.

And here is the breaking point.

Hmm, I say that the game has more influence on That Guy Right There then one would assume.
Then again, he could of been anybody IRL at this point.

this is annoying

the mc really is an asshole

I really enjoyed reading this. Being that I’m not much of a reader I was suprised to find so captivated in the ideas. I just wish there was more for me to read! Thank you :)

I'm loving this story! Please make more!