"midichlorians" so are you rolling your eyes yet hahaha

it's like the sw sequels, and GoT later seasons. you had an end scene in mind, so you punched and beat and kicked the story to reach your end scene. really not great. what a waste of a great setup.

Stories are like a tree, it grows from the ground and grows branches and leaves, and seeds of new stories. stories shouldn't be treated like swords where you imagine the end product, and then start hammering a lump of metal.

it's like harry is intentionally ignoring the changes in ron, even when it's so in your face. it's like you forcing the story along

harry seems useless, more useless than canon harry

This chapter seems way too forced, like you had to make the 4 year results be exactly the same. You're sprinkling stuff to the story but if the story reaches the exact same end what is the point of the whole story. what is the point of adding the holocron if it does not change anything resembling plot points? It's the same story. maybe just jump to the end of the books and build from there. Where is the agency of the main characters. and he is a jedi, he should have felt something about crouch, resisted, or at the very least reacted. you made Jedi powers useless.

Alright this is looking to be good. But i want to know if harry is going to get a light saber? And i dont mean turn your wand into a lightsaber like some of the fics i read. And does harry need a wand? He can probably do everything without it and the incantation.

its not voldy harry
look ... closer

i was hoping it would be green but the description of asimbling the saber more than makes up for it

Darth Wesly Ron ?

i always felt nither the sith or jedi were right about the light/dark thing raven's balenced force makes the most sence to me

Hey I'm reading this story and believe me it's GREAT. But I can't help but wonder something. Are you planning on making every magical person a Force-sensitive? If you are then it opens up possibilities, but if you're not, then you have your own ideas to this story. I mean this is still your story but if every magical person is Force-sensitive then we get many new possibilities.

I have no doubt that when Ron gets his lightsabre to work it will be a nice bright Griffindor red.

Yes, Voldemort, it has to be Voldemort who's never even heard of the Jedi. Not Ron 'Hair Trigger Temper' Weasley who is gaining dark force points at a great rate of knots.

The only problem I have with this chapter is that it implies that this version of Voldemort is actually competent and pragmatic, rather than the grandstanding nutso Harry normally has to deal with. But that's okay, I guess. This Harry is far more capable than in canon.

A barely trained Force User, even if he had a great talent for it, managed to make a golden BB shot on a thermal exhaust port. I agree that Quidditch would hardly be an issue to three trained Force Users.