please continue this story

I’d like to see a Six and Miranda pairing, I think that in all the spartan in mass effect 2 stories it makes the most sense given they both were designed/trained to be the best of humanity. The Spartan and alien pairings have always been hard to understand given to have one the spartan needs to overcome nearly 30 years of constant war against genocidal aliens and go from viewing alines in general as mortal enemies to love interest in a couple of months.

This story is awesome, hope there's gonna be an update.

Keep it up I love this story please.

Great story, hope there’s an update

Your writing is excellent, I'm just going to criticize something, which for me is common in many fanfics: writing the same story as in games.
There is so much that a fan could do (and much better than the original writers).

regards

WTF was the point of this chapter except rehashing what already happened in the game with no changes? what a fucking waste of everyone's time.

I like history very much, you really write very well, I only have one complaints:

I think you made the Spartan too much OP, although I agree that the regular troops of ME would not be a rival, the biotics would put any Spartan in a big hurry in closed places (short range).
ME bullets would also be very effective against Espartan shields and would easily pierce areas where there is no armor (I agree that they would be very ineffective against titanium armor).

And finally, another very OP thing was the AI, I agree that the AS of the UNSC would be OP for the normal AI of ME, but against one like EDI? I don't know if it would be as easy as a second to "hack" everything.

Greetings.

Not even halfway through the chapter and I already ship Six and Kelly.

That is one of the most awsome fics I've ever read