I love this !

Do zera and shepard!

This was good didn't expect to see a female brute x human fic.
I am surprised no one has tried to make a human x many different halo females, like either in ODST or reach a civ is trying to run to stay alive but get's getting mixed up or found by various females from both sides. Cue "romance" scenes where he has to limp afterwards to safety.

It would be a very good story of one shots with female versions of Elites/Spartans/Brutes/Marines/Jackals/ODST's/Prophet/Pilot.

Hmm, pretty 'fetishistic' but could still use some touching up (I tend to use the works of 'Nidoran Duran' as some sort of 'golden standard' in regards to written pornography - look up their work if you want some reference or 'reading material')...

More curious on how the Halo Universe would have ended up (or improved/worsened, if only slightly) had the Rookie survived his 'unceremonious send-off' in 'Halo: New Blood' (and if the Halo series were still being developed by Bungie). Would have loved reading about (or playing as) him and Edward Buck as SPARTAN-IVs in 'Halo 5: Guardians'...

Mmm... this Jiralhanae is THICC! On a more 'serious' note (or whatever counts as serious in regards to human and alien romance/porn), is this really just going to be a one-shot? Sure, it could be quite the challenge having to continue Alba and the Rookie's life since they're both effectively deserters...

Why not turn their escape into a caper (escapade/ridiculous activity)? A lone Phantom going at 'ludicrous speeds' suddenly has both the Covenant and ODSTs on New Mombasa pause in genuine bewilderment, before pursuing them (and having the Rookie in deep shit while you're at it; he did after all ditch his squad-mates).

If you want a mental picture, I'm looking at an ODST and Jiralhanae duo (Alba holding onto the Rookie like some rugby ball) being chased by the UNSC, The Covenant, The Banished, Sedran Colonial Guard, Insurrectionists, etc. (...) or better yet something Homer Simpson would normally do on an average Friday afternoon!

And for the record, while I can see them as a dating/married couple, I am NOT so curious as to see Human-Jiralhanae hybrids (much). You want to try writing Alba and the Rookie as a family, I strongly urge you to place it under a 'Halo' and 'Mass Effect' crossover, where the crossover setting would be more 'welcoming' for those two...

On another unrelated topic, may I interest you into rewriting 'Halo Legends - The Babysitter' only with the squad 'Alpha-Nine' (protagonists of Halo 3: ODST)? I'm very curious on seeing the dynamic between Cal-141 and the Rookie - picture these two never speaking for the majority of the story, yet through their teamwork (and a couple of antics here and there) they become the dual-epitome of 'actions speak louder than words'.

I never really liked the ODST O'Brien, anyway...

Would love to see a fanfic of them as a family and having kids

There really needsorry to be more stories like this. Male humans with female Halo aliens.

I was *ahem* researching the Jiralhanae last night, and found some of rubes more... explicit works. Now I find this. Small world huh.
If you continue this work, could you introduce BurkeXZera’jin? Just a suggestion.
(P.s. this is actually really well written... good job tovarisch!)

Dude, is that lewd between a Brute and an ODST? These fan-fictions are not very GAMER.

Bit shit but i still fapped

I hope you make a sequel like maybe a story about them being parents or going on missions together or something I can already think of the look on Romeo space along with the rest of his team.

despacito

Sidhsidbssisbshsvsskddxj I love this pairing! I am so happy that there is a story that goes with the pictures! It is lovely!

Great story, hoping to see more of your works here.

This is an interesting story you have concocted here. Normally the alien is a sangheli but this time it is a brute. Never would have seen that coming. Though I find it odd that the status is complete and not in progress. Think about it, they are still on earth leaving new Mombasa. And the war is still going on. From the way you ended the story you make it sound like you have more to offer. And personally I would find future interactions to be surprising. I mean an ODST and brute working together, you can’t tell me that doesn’t deserve more than one page. But that’s just me. I along with whomever else enjoyed this story would very much like to see the story continued.