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   nalakahansato chapter 10 . 7/28 This is an amazing fanfic. I do write fanfiction, just not here, but I don't have a store for writing. If you have any suggestions, you could PM me, but still, this is an amazing fanfic |
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/23 I think Jessie, James, and Meowth deserve a redemption arc because even though they are villains they do some heroic acts when helping Ash save people's lives. |
| GlassPark chapter 11 . 7/24 Take your time we can wait uwu As for Team Rocket well I think redemption arc would be nice. Personally I also find them hella annoying but they aint bad characters they just a bit irritating at times. Either way it will be nice to see what you decide to do with them. Good luck! |
| eternal king of fire chapter 11 . 7/24 you know from what ive read in your story if jessie and james would thrown in jail geovani would arrange an accident to keep them quit |
| Reddeath16gmail chapter 11 . 7/24 Do a redemption arc I haven’t read any fic that redeem Jessie and James |
| Joanne Frances Tiano Cajilig chapter 11 . 7/23 It's OK school is important. The readers need to be patient... |
| griffin blackwood chapter 11 . 7/23 Having team rocket be redeemed in some manner might be fun. So they’re more Rivals than bad guys because they don’t seem as bad as they appear with their back stories. |
| mermizle chapter 11 . 7/23 Life happens, don't worry about delays to updates you'll get to it when you get to it and we'll enjoy it when you do. Maybe send them to jail and maybe send Meowth to Professor Oak for research into why the heck he can talk? Let them stay in jail for a bit and then maybe later on down the line have them crop back up for a chapter as reformed people, maybe have them get out and end up going to oaks to retrieve Meowth but get suckered into being his errand runners or assistants somehow. |
| Night Hunter533 chapter 11 . 7/23 Have them pull a few stunts that he stumbles upon, similar to how it works in the games. Eventually have them either start a redemption arc or arrest them either way... |
| InudaTheFox chapter 11 . 7/23 You could have them arrested and like a grunt or admin from Rocket comes in with a psychic type and erases the memories of the boss, or at least blurs them enough that they cant recall his name or looks. |
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/12 Please update |
| buterflypuss chapter 10 . 7/12 Good chap |
| NinjaFang1331 chapter 10 . 7/12 Nice work |
| Lugia Moon chapter 10 . 7/12 Good Chapter. I like how you didn't force Ash and Gary to be 1 and 2 and the fact that neither won. I think that makes it a little more realistic. I would have liked just a little more detail on contest, but it's not the main focus so i get why there isn't a lot of detail as well. Team Rocket has appeared, I wonder how you will handle these thieves? Overall was a great chapter and I loved it. Don't pressure yourself either, life takes precedence. until next time, LM out. |
| frankieu chapter 10 . 7/12 nice chapter thx for writing it liked the battle with gary and ash nice to see the rocket's in action the first time do wonder if lance or steven will react since the might be watching ? |
