WTF?

Yeah, this is poorly written. This is just bad. I can speak objectively about this, criticizing the grammar, the pacing, the lack of character development, etc. Personally, I hate it. But I will forget about it. Thank God.

Overall, “Vacation Trouble” is the shining example of bad fan fiction, with bad writing, lack of intent, and just pointless. 1/10

THIS SHOULD BE A ONE-SHOT!

Good story