Hey plz plz plz plz update this story very very very very soon ok plz plz and thank you ok..

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So the whole update every month went flying out the door real quick.

RP

Simple chapter but sometimes that helps with the flow to the next chapter. Kazehana coming up that’s good and hopefully coming to minato. I can understand the not winging of Mia in your story. It’s good your updating regularly as well people will still crave your story. I won’t read your new story not a fan of that anime but I wish you the best of luck with it.

RP

I still like it. I’m not a fan of OC characters but the way you do it here and taking sekirei that are minatos or should have been like Akitsu just saying. So when does minato wing kazehana and Mia?

RP

Heeeeeeey Mr Man. It's nice to see that you are back and that you have something for chapter itself is decent and nothing really to critique. What I would go for is just a longer chapter length so you could everything across. See ya later bud.

Do you think you can add Minato to the "tags" on this story? You might have more reviews then. I normally don't read stories that have an OC as the main protagonist, but I gave this story an honest chance and I'm liking it so far. As for the chapter, it was pretty good; until I finished it. Keep 'em coming, and you're welcome for bringing the new Sekirei Manga to your attention.

Still here.

RP

Any plans on making Kagari/Homura a female at any point when Minato wings him/her in the story later? I actually grew too like this pairing after reading the new Sekirei Manga. Anyway, keep it up!

Thank you for your response I will keep reading. I also liked the interactions between karasuba and yahan with minato. I think I will like this better good job.

RP

I like you put karasuba with minato. The rest of your story not liking so much right now. I like yomi with minato as well. I will keep reading if you keep updating like you should the I'll past judgement on it. Also if kazehana doesn't go to minato instant stop reading for me. It's bad enough your using an OC.

Minato just disappointment and waste of time

hmm interesting story main character a female sekirei that can wing other sekirei and she winds up as one chiho's sekirei interesting story indeed wonder what's going to happen next please write more chapters.

It's nice to see that you have gotten the spacing issue fixed. To me that was the main problem with your story. The stuff I have issues with (in other stories) is that the OC is either doing nothing with the main plot and just remove Minato from the picture or that they have por characterization. It's really refreshing to see something new with sekirei. I wish you good luck in your futuro endevores.