still here and still enjoying it, again and again ! thank YOU to continue writing it !

alol me again smiling anon wonderful amazing work doll than a million

my haleigh doll it is smiling anon goods job i repeat great spectacular job wonderful doll thank you!

You need a beta. Badly.

The plural of tree is trees, not tree’s. Just saying. And you have both Avaleina and Avaleana. Make up your mind...

totally still reading and OMG LOVE THE ENDING OF THIS CHAPTER! IT'S SO PERFECT!

Great chapter!

I couldn’t help it, i HAD to write a review because 89 was bugging me! I honestly love this story I just started it and I’m glad you literally just updated:) pls tell me that Legolas and Ava are going to actually get married soon . Honestly I find the whole ‘will you marry me even tho we’re already engaged’ thing really sweet. ;)

Cheveron Chick!

I love this story! After 14 chapters I eagerly await more. The Mirkwood you create is so wonderfully real. It has the feel of having depth, history and beauty. The dancing in this chapter was a joy to read. In an earlier chapter you write Ava being trained as a dancer and a very good one but sadly she stopped dancing and had to become a warrior for her people and to fight the evil in Mirkwood and Middle Earth. A life changed by necessity. I love that you allow Thranduil to banter with close friends. Wonderful. You capture a sense of real joy and merriment within the Wood Elves.

More please.

M.

Gimli showing that expected courage in confronting Thranduil was a wonderful scene. Thranduil's understated response was perfect. Again I can really see this scene between John Rhys-Davies' Gimli and Lee Pace's Thranduil in my head.

Legolas' pain of sea-longing is palpable.

Thank you!

M

Cheveron Chick!

I am really enjoying this story! Haven't commented on the last couple of chapters because I was so busy reading but I thought I would stop long enough right now to review. I thought you were going to react the barrel scene but in reverse but loved it when Thranduil unexpectantly showed up and Gimli thought that he wasn't long for this world. Wonderful. The differing shades of joy in the subjects of the woodland realm in seeing their prince again was a joy to read. The Reunion of father and son was well thought out. Legolas was suitably terrified and Thranduil was understandably upset but you could feel the love there. I could hear Lee Pace's wonderful Thranduil voicing your words.

Gimli's drawn out discomfiture is very entertaining!

The developing storyline of concern about Legolas' state is nicely developing. You are letting us see the joy of the reunion and then introducing slowly the real reason for the essential visit. Really enjoying this story. Back to reading.

The discussion of the forest healing is beautifully done. The image of the forest coming alive again is wonderful.
LOL! about sneaking Gimli in. So very true if 13 dwarves can sneak out, most assuredly one dwarf can sneak in.

Forgot to say in Chapter 1 The shouted discussion about Gandalf was a hoot! Mithrandir! the same Mithrandir that thought 4 hobbits, 2 men, a elf and a dwarf could defeat a dragon! Golden stuff!

Love the start of this! So many interesting storylines setting themselves up. Love the Twins' snark! And the sadness of Legolas about his mother. Slight grammatical point and sorry if this has been mentioned before. "Trees" is the plural of "Tree". "Tree's" is the possessive of a single tree.

Other than that I am loving this story and look forward to Thranduil meeting with his son. Intrigued by Legolas' betrothed. Gimli's discomfiture is nicely drawn. On to Chapter 2!

This is very good! I love how you've portrayed the characters it's all realistic to how they are.

If you have time, please feel free to check out my fic "castaway".. I'll be adding this story to my favourites.

That was so cute! I love the fellowship hanging out with the elves! :-)