This was one of the best fics I've ever read! The characters were all on point
I keep thinking about it. I love when I finish a fic and start to ask some extra questions to myself even if it was well rounded and ended good and this fic left such a sweet aftertaste!
You don't need to answer them but I wanted to throw some of those questions I was asking myself in the air, just so you know how much I was still daydreaming about this as I finished reading your fic ;
I wonder if Sabo got his memory back? If so, does he go to Ace to talk with him?
Iva-chan is still on Impel Down. I headcanon that somehow Bon-chan will find a way to the Okama Paradise and set them all free.
What was luffy reaction to it all? Did he watch the transmission of the execution?
I'm also imagining the Alabasta Ace&Crew meeting with them just freaking out because? Luffy's brother is Gol D. Rogers's son? What the hell kinda bull-
Would Luffy have the patience not to fling himself at Mody Dick asap (like before even setting sail for the first time yet) after the execution to hug Ace cause boy almost died.
Is lovebirds a common joke on Moby now? When does luffy discover Ace/Marco?
Does Ace ever piss Marco enough the he goes and does one of The Pranks on him? Or is he Special Boyfriend and he can never anger Marco enough to warrant that? Does Ace /try/ not to anger Marco?
*This one is stupid but bear with me* Fire Sex. Is it a thing? Do they sleep on the same room now that Ace joined?
Without Teach to f* things up does Whitebeard actually die from old age? Did Teach even find the Yami Yami no mi before (thankfully) dying?

There might be more but for now those were the questions that kept me up at night still thinking about this masterpiece! Thank you very much for writing this fic

this was awesome! thanks for writing the story!

The trick with the Mera Mera No Mi was fantastic. Seriously that was one of the best and most inventive ways of using the Canon Law on Devil Fruits that I’ve read.
I also like how different people are influenced by the fact that the attempt to execute Ace is purely for being the Pirate King’s son without even the pretence of it happening for any crimes he’s committed. I’ll also admit I liked your portrayal of Ace as a bounty hunter. In particular that he is still on friendly terms with Shanks in spite of it.
All in all I think this was a pretty good, quite enjoyable story and thanks for writing/posting it.

But you didn’t throw a chair at him!

Multiple chairs for teach!

Wow ! Thank u for the wonderful update ... your stories are really really REALLY awsome ...pls update more because i just cant get enough of your work :)

RANDOMLY EXPLODING PIGEONS XDDDDD I can't stop laughing at it! XDDDDD

This was so good I had a good laugh thanks for sharing

This is marked " in progress" else I would've read this earlier- please change this

that was so beautiful and at the same time so hilarious XD I couldn't stop laughing! I love the crew's silly antics and how you portrayed the familial dynamic of the Whitebeard pirates. very well done. I would suggest, despite the reverence i have for your story, getting someone to edit your spelling and grammar. neither are bad, but there were a few words you consistently misspelled and there was the occasional grammatical error. other than that, I have no complaints

I loved this! Thank you for writing this story!

Oh my god! thank you so much for writing this. Everything made sense! I loved it, oh man the feels! God this was just amazing and so much fun to read. Silly but not super silly, like Ace's escape made sense.
Dane, I loved the Whiteboard family bonding moments. Like I feel like we got a snippet of how their lives were. I'm so happy that I stumbled upon this when the 1st ch came out. Like it was such an intresting concept and you mad Ace so god damn lovable. He was such a punk, I loved inner anguish that Ace had but ignored, was added well.
Oh man and the chemistry between Marco and Ace was just wow. No shame in not being able to write a sex scene, like it's hard. I think you did okay and like you gave the audience the right assumptions and all. I think you made the right choice of only adding 1 explicit sex scene, it was tastefully added. I love Marco, he's so cool. And not a complete stick in the mud, like how a lot of the fandom portrays him. He's clever, playful and caring.
Any who, I just wanted to say thank you so much for taking the time to write and share your work with us! You completed it and I just loved it, I look forward to rereading this in the future, so thank you so much!

Hi there! So this is the end,,, Don't worry, your Omake was fine, kinda (｡’’｡)? at first but then...

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Well, I hope you get inspired to write more ff! I know we can't leave kudos here in ff, and most of the comments are demands for updates and more stories, but its one way to show support so yeah, good luck!

Hahaha... That was a great ending. Poor Thatch. You are evil Marco. I loved this story thank you for writing it. XD

This is a great story! I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!