Very good spin-off of Naruto with plenty of action, suspense and horror.
I believe that this story could use a little romance\sex scenes.
Wonder if Naruto is going to hook with Haku or Hinata or better yet both.
Kotero needs to hook up with some women also.

I really enjoyed these past few chapters; the action, the drama, it all was breath taking. I really enjoyed reading your work. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Love this story. Can't wait for the next update!

Man these last 4 chapters have been fucking Brilliant!

My heart was hurting and then the bros get together and that got me all in happy tears man.

Fuck Danzo, I hope he gets whats coming for him. But kudos to you for actually writing about him trying to be a sneaky fuck. I hate him but this makes sense.

I'm glad that Kotero was all broken and glum. Yeah, you can say it looked paethitic, but his resolve is now like super strong and his mental growth is one I like. Naruto has his back all the way! I'm glad cause this makes him more real if you get me.

Kotero used to have this "I'm strong and unshakeable" feel bout him, but not anymore. He's human and I love it.

Can't wait for the next chapter man!

Yay! An update! I’m so happy you finally gotten back on this lol I was beginning to worry XP

Great chapter, as usual. You’re moving the plot forward nicely and I’m looking forward to seeing what happens next. Particularly how Danzō and ROOT will proceed from here. Given they have just attacked their own village- sorta.

It seems we need more medical-nin man. Bro was totally useless when Iwashi got hurt and had NO clue wtf Kotero was talking about. Perhaps that’ll be something Kotero and Tsuande can work on once she becomes hokage?

Great work bro, I’m still greeting enjoying and deeply loving this story.

There were a few errors- I saw like three that I can remember off the top of my head. Nothing serious just pesky grammatical stuff

Amazing Chapter! I'm worried for what Danzo will do next. And Naruto is making good progress. I can't wait to see him get promoted.

Damn son, Naruto is strong ninja now. He better become a chunin after this.

Very good fight. Love the back and forth with Shikamaru. He's low-key my favourite.

That fight was Badass! Loved the action. Naruto is fucking hardcore!

These last two chapters were really good.

I was disappointed with your chunin exams tbh. Apart from Naruto and Sasuke fighting together and the epic scenes there and that training chapter with Kotero, it went more or less the same. I'm no writer, but it would've been cool if it was different. But it didn't drag on which is good.

But these two chapters with Jiraiya and Naruto, then the Capital and Niko and his training and new weapons. It was really good. I'm excited for the fights now. Naruto against Lee should be epic!

I liked your take on the wave arc with that Spades dude. Reminds me of Varys or Little finger from ASOIAF. Haku surviving was sorta predictible with Kotero coming in. I've read the wave arc a hundred times and I've never seen Naruto do that kind of shit before. It be bad if it went more or less like canon.

I hope the future has some more orginaility to it, like your previous chapters with Kotero.

That end was wholesome.

OMG kill danzo already, fucking massacre him and his root, most annoying warmonger ever. If you drag this out it would just be stupid, he's an old man not even that strong with stolen abilities that only keep him alive... kill him quick

Rollercoaster of emotions and action. Loved it. Kotero is OG for an OC. Will read more.

Ugh... Hope someone deals with Danzo soon.

Bro, its been like ages now. update already

story is good, I want to read more.