It's very good story it's feels real at some times. Although naming it romance is not good cause there is so little if not in here, it only gives a delusion the story would have a happy ending i was routing for it, ah well at least they kissed and lay beside each other.
-Only thing strikes me odd, sure harry is a leader or the one who people look up to. But considering there older teenagers there and dumbles with the rest, of all those people ron gets to be the leader for real!? dumb agressive fly of the handle ron i so hardly doubt that.

oooof. my heart. my poor poor heart. They diedvaliantly but so so sadSuch a good story just so so sad.

Wow... I'm speechless. But this is a review so you are expecting a few words, right ?
This is an incredible work. First the paused speech, the rhythm, the accurate and riched description. It must have taken so much time and effort to get to this quality. Truly, bravo. It's so well written ! Very very few fanfictions reach that level !
Then the story. While really depressing - let's be honest - it's a thrilling tale. That one Hermione Granger, muggleborn, loyal to the very end of her fingertips, smartest witch or the age, could willingly betray her friends, specially Harry, is unthinkable. It would be like Harry himself betraying his friends in favor of Voldy, the very person who murdered his parents. I believe no one has even tried that yet, but if they did, I wish them good luck. But you did it. And cleverly. Beautifully. I will not stop on the very few mistakes here and there regarding to the wizarding world because... Well, who cares?! I don't. I enjoyed my reading way too much to stop on little details.
I understand this fiction has been written well before HP 6 and 7. And I would really like to have your feedback on them. Did you enjoy them ? Did you smirk with satisfaction when you reached the end of DH?
Wishing you a lovely day.

You know, I was expecting some sort of 'favour to spare Harry and Ron' deal all this time but...

That was just stupid. And since you've already established that she's still under Tom's control but she's perfectly capable of killing herself, there's clearly still one loophole she could have used, so it's not just stupid, it's stupid and she's wrong.

So damn sad but so brilliant.

very interesting

Jesus Christ it's the interrupted kiss cliche

I love your ending. I love how it doesn't try and wrap everything up. Thank you for your time and effort

This is an absolutely amazing story. Of course I wish that Harry and Hermione didn't have to die... but what happens, happens. I loved your character portrayals, and I can't wait to devour more of your work.

Wow, now that was a very heavy ending and a good piece of fanfiction. I think you did a good job of portraying the confusing emotions both Harry and Hermione were going through throughout the fic and the fact that Hermione had gone through what she believed she had to, to keep Harry and Ron alive was just staggering. The redemption of the story was good and the way you worked through Hermione going from traitor to heroin was very well done. I think the characters were well done if not a bit too underpowered. I mean Harry has spent these two years doing what? Playing hide and seek with the Voldemort and his Death Eaters. You would suspect he would be learning and training others how to fight this resistance to the Dark. Not playing whack a mole where they stick their head out and then duck back in till the next turn. I also think you had him too under skilled. Harry is the most powerful wizard in his age group and is very adept to spell work. Yet he is nearly bested by a bigoted pureblood in a hand to hand battle. Someone that it would be beneath to know how to fight in such a fashion.
I guess all I can say to end is that you had me wondering what was next till the end and then it kinda was a let down that they only were allowed a few shared kisses and a declaration of their love for each other. And then for the epilogue we get the rambles of one Ron Weasley. Well I guess I did like the majority so one chapter that kinda fell short for me won't keep me from favoring this but it does make me wish for something a bit different. I do thank you for sharing it was an interesting read.

Oh my gosh! Awesome story! I was up until 1:30 in the morning trying to finish it! I cried when Harry and Hemione died...so sad... Anyway, you write amazingly well. Congratulations on the PERFECT STORY. Thank you for giving me the pleasure of reading it.

Why they left Lucius alive? It makes absolutely no sense.

This is freaking amazing. Omfg. I can't even. This is honestly the most beautiful piece of work I have ever seen on .

Omg, this is really good, I'm really looking forward to finishing it

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