Reviews for Seven Wonders
Alex chapter 25 . 11/3/2019
I got way to invested in this, thank you so much for putting in so much effort into this I really appreciate it, I only wish it never had to end
hippythrashingdog600 chapter 1 . 9/22/2019
You might as well sell your tits and ass while you’re at it, fuckbitch.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2019
Kill yourself for pushing your shitty ass liberal agenda on everyone.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/21/2019
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Guest chapter 1 . 2/21/2019
Meh. Looks bland and not worth reading. Just more unwanted garbage.
Guest chapter 25 . 2/6/2019
This has been one of the most amazing samus x zelda fics i have ever read i wish it would have been longer but i know how exhausting it is to stick to a fanfiction, and put so much ideas into it as you have. Im a writer myself and i must say i respect your work deeply, it has brought me so much joy and feels and 3 full days of entertainment, you managed to cover up all of my sadness even if for a short period of time, and on and on everyime i will think about the you for writing this fic, im really grateful and i wish only luck upon you and everything you wanna do in your future
-roxxy (20)
nahte123456 chapter 25 . 11/13/2018
Good story, I'll wait a bit to pick up the sequel but this was pretty good. Largest complaint is that it felt to short, like for a romance the story was basically only the plot over a few days/weeks. I think a few "side missions" would have done this story wonders. Have them visit a Chozo ruin and talk about them a bit or something, just add a bit more no-plot personality between the two.
Squall Leonhart1 chapter 25 . 9/28/2018
I just randomly came across this after browsing through the site and, well, damn :) Your story was very well-written, and you actually made Samus having a PTSD episode come off as believable, which is more than can be said of what they did in Other M :P Fabulous work :)
viento chapter 25 . 9/15/2018
Wow, it was amazing, the best fic samus x zelda i have read, thanks for your hard work, i love it 100%!
MiriaJiyuu chapter 25 . 6/28/2018
I cannot believe I just read this front to back in a single sitting... not a pairing I've ever read before but I thought 'Why not' guess I'll be checking out the sequel
TacoKing23 chapter 25 . 5/25/2018
And so the journey ends. This was a fun one. I like how you developed the girls and their relationship over the course of their mission. I hope to see more fun stories from you in the future.
Sabertuth chapter 25 . 5/24/2018
Why do the best things always end? I really love your story, thank you for writing it. The final battle was very well done and the ending felt perfect. If you write more about samus and Zelda or any other couple i happen to ship I will definitel read it. Thanks again... More please
IAmAnonReviewer chapter 25 . 5/22/2018
Wonderful. I can't say more than that.
OnePunchFan8 chapter 25 . 5/21/2018
Great chapter! Is there going to be an epilogue? Maybe the collected wonders can do something...
JustARandomGuy312 chapter 25 . 5/21/2018
Well, what can I say? I mean, it's over now. This is it. Tbh I expected it to run a tiny bit more but I guess that there wasn't much left to do with all the Wonders collected and both Ridley and Ganon finally dead. And I'm actually happy that they could find a way so Zelda and Samus get to be together, as well as finally giving Samus a home, even though she'll be mostly "working", at least now she has an actual motivation to fight for besides the mission, something to look forward to after she completes her tasks.

Just, you know, I would've liked to see an epilogue. Like too see how the events have unfolded after all this and see everyone's new take on their lives. I mean, does Link actually approve of the relationship, or does he do like Impa and just let it be even though he doesn't understand? What will be of Pikachu now? Will he stick to Samus like she was her trainer now or something like that? And what of the places they visited? A return trip there to tell them about their success would've been nice, maybe returning the Wonders to their owners, just in case evil ever rises again so they won't be all just sitting there on the same place? Or are they all still necessary to travel through time and spaceso they have to keep them? Talk about it, was the Triforce a Wonder then or just the key to unlock their power? Because if this is the Seventh and Last Wonder (assuming it's the Wonder of Time too given its power) then the Triforce can't be a Wonder, unless this is an Eighth Wonder.

I know I have too many questions for a story that's already over, but I just feel like those are a couple of plot holes there, and I feel like an epilogue can be a great way to wrap a story for good, unless you ever plan to make a sequel to it.

I admit I am actually saddened because I've had much fun reading and everyday was filles with anticipation and excitement on whether there's a new chapter or not, at a couple of points I actually checked my email 5 times a day to see if there was something new, and holy hell when I saw there was a new chapter! But now the story is over, great to see an ending to this amazing adventure and romance tale (even though it could be better wrapped up imo), but sad because that means there won't be more if it.

But anyways, even though it's the end of Seven Wonders, it's in no way the end of EeveeNicks, and whenever something new pops up, I'll give it a read! Especially when it includes my more familiar franchises, because as mentioned, Metroid is something I like, but I'm nowhere as close to it as I am to Mario or Zelda, while I've always been meh about Pokémon.

But still, I'd call this your first big adventure/romance/crossover story a great success. Personally I give it about an 8.5 out of 10 trying to be as objective as I can. And I'm usually harsh upon rating stuff, I don't do like main reviewers who say giving, for example, a 6.8 is a very bad note when it really means it's actually ok. If it was bad, I'd give it a 2 or less. But this time it's an 8.5 as in "This is actually pretty dang good!"

And as always, it'll be a great pleasure for me if you respond me with a PM, possobly explaining some plot holes and maybe getting to know about your future plans. It's all up to you!
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