Aww how cute! I liked this story very good :D

This was very interesting. I would freak out if I couldn't find my dad, so good job to Beezus for handling the situation :-)

I'm really liking this, it's very good! :-)

Very nice story! I enjoyed it. :-)

Really cute wrap-up, though I was expecting Ramona to become friends with Mrs. Sullivan. Maybe it’s just me. But anyway, really nice work!

Great way to end the story. Witch peas. I guess she'll have another reason to hate peas.

Haha! This is my favorite chapter yet! In fact, I think this is my favorite story that you’ve ever written. I love the escapade with the frog, and all the little parts of the plot are coming together in one big mess! XD

Great chapter. I was giggling off and on. Great job!

Huh, things are getting interesting! I’m looking forward to what comes next! The inclusion of this scary old neighbor is certainly eye-catching.

Great job. Can't wait for more!

Great start, and I like the addition of a new character! It might be hard for Beezus at the beach, but I’m sure Ramona will get into some interesting adventures!

It's good! Great job!