I'm not sure if I like the 5 1 thing, but I guess it gives the story some structure.

A good story with a cruel ending. Thanks for writing!

Didn't a previous chapter say that Sirius was dead?

OMG! This needs a sequel, desperately!

Brilliant. Any plans for a sequel?

I like how this is starting, but please don't rush the plot! A looot just happened, and I hope you're taking this somewhere apart from a short story.

This is a cute start!

This can't be the end. It seems like its still in the middle of the story. Harry and Jon are back plus they are about to fight to bring peace. Plus they are learning about the White Walkers at the end. Though i hope jon can marry harry and not some girl. Please.. update and write on!

Hahahaha
Sorry for my dirty mind, but that could totally be misunderstood
"The phoenix hopped down onto the bed, sitting perched between Harry's legs and nosed at him through the blankets."

This story is over? Are you going to make a sequel to it? I would love to read more of it if you do.

sequel definitely, please do not marry Jon with another person, it has to be with Harry, maybe you can have Mpreg or something else that makes them own children, after all Harry is a wizard / phoenix, so there's gotta be some way do not involve marrying someone else ! ;'*

sequel definitely, please do not marry Jon with another person, it has to be with Harry, maybe you can have Mpreg or something else that makes them own children, after all Harry is a wizard / phoenix, so there's gotta be some way do not involve marrying someone else !

Will there be a sequel?

Loved the story but would really love to read more so sequel please

definitely would love you to continue the story...it was just getting good