This is so cute! Please make more soon! I can’t wait till Jack finally finds out Danny’s secret, the reveal is always my favourite part of stories!

You got to be careful of continuity. Danny didn't actually mention the journals when Jack referred to them. Other than that amazing chapter. I kinda wish jack did drop Danny though so he would have had a little freak out only to see that Danny is perfectly comfortable in the ice water if a little soggy. I hope the awkward fly home is made even more uncomfortable with talk of how pretty jacks ice is and talk about the rest of the guardians. Also I have a slight suggestion for a later scene. Jack could want to see Danny use his ice powers so Danny forms a crystal or maybe a snowflake and gives it to Jack to keep saying it is not as pretty or detailed as jacks ice but it won't melt so he can keep it as a gift.

Awh man that was so funny! Can't believe you updated so quickly, I look forward to the next part -

This is GREAT! Can't wait to read the next chapter

i'm... interested

Please make this a Crossover, not an actual fanfiction of ROTG.

Hey this was v cool and engaging I look forward to seeing how they'll meet .