feel it was rushed but I love it when its rushed

Cami is not the first and won't be the last. Military life is hard and it takes a special type of spouse/girlfriend that can deal with the separation and the fear.

FYI:
Sergant First Class is an Army E-7, in the Marine Corps an E-7 is a Gunnery Sergant.
A Marine would never call a pistol or rifle a "gun" a "gun" is your manhood. The term that would be used is weapon.
In my day a Marine tour of duty was 13 months but that was a long time ago. I hope it's not eighteen now as that would totally suck. I like your story and am impressed by the amount of detailed research you did. I was a Marine myself and spent twenty two years in.

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LOL I AM BORN ON 25th OF JULY! THIS IS DESTINY

well some Devine Beauty could fix his heart...just sayin'

I am going to throw up if he calls Cami "milady"! This name is made to show his love for Astrid and ONLY Astrid!*thinks about Hiccup calling Camicazi milady* too late *throws up*

Hi I love all of your hiccstrid fanfics so much that I read them like 5 times already including this one which is my favorite of them all. Hope you will write another hiccstrid fanfic because you are so good with them!

Also, when Astrid was sick in one of the chapters, I thought Camicazi had kidnapped her and tied her up because she’s a mental psychopath. Lol.

This was great! I love the plot! And the information and different references and everything— it shows that you put in a lot of effort!

Of course, there’s room for improvement. Generally, the delivery. A bit scattered, but a little practice and it’s good to go. And some tiny errors like forgetting quotation marks and all that.

But the information of the Marines, the drama, the action, the plot itself is incredible!

Greay job, I love it!

Loved it just as I love all of your stories!
Until next time,
Keep up the awesome work!

But wasn’t he already riding on the back of Toothless before? How it was explained made it sound like they weren’t before. Other then the fact that hiccup decides to use leather for th fin instead of a new material, which would also be equally difficult to find, it’s been amazing. And i love how i now know so much about pregnancies just from reading your stories...don’t know if that’s a good thing or a bad thing yet.
Until next time,
Keep up the awesome work!

That was absolutely fantastic. You truly do an amazing job and I can't wait to see what you have planned next.

Yay he made it.

Great story I hope too see more of your work.