holy... is that a jojos reference

You have Gamers Body, any chakra coil damage(if that's even possible for the mc) could be slept off.

its odd that she stopped leveling i would have assumed once she left the village she would have abused the dungeons and made it to the 300 area

wouldn't gamers body negate any negative effects that training would have on chakra coils?

the chakra is supposed to be 170

int should be 4

At chapter 4. I hope she tries leaving and going to Konoha. Idk I feel like if it was ME. I’d try hauling ass to Konoha anyway I knew how. Of course it’d take a lot of planning being so young. But ultimately if you could get there before academy starts you’d be set. Especially if you “accidentally” showed the hokage you had a Kekkai genkai. Idk. Lot goes into that but here’s hoping she finds a way’

should have 4 int at the end of this chap

ty for the update

can't wait for the next chapter.

Thank you for writing this have a good one

Noted that you want to rewrite older chapters. Can definitely tell the difference, your edits are great. Eagerly awaiting the finale!

Looking foreword to the next one!

I'm... really confused about Tamako. It feels like she's just lazing around, lacking any real purpose. Sure, in like chapter 2 or something she decides to find her mother, but never mentions that again and doesn't appear to really cause after that goal. What's her motivation? Why would she do something as risky as work with the Akatsuki without a damn good reason why? Hell, why did she do it in the first place? She knew it was risky, said so herself, and what does it get her?

She just... who is she as a character? What does she want?

This is a really good fanfiction out of the hundreds of over 100k word fanfics I've read this is I the top fifth of them so please continue this has been a joy to read.