| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Dusknoir of Azkaban |
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Emoni chapter 5 . 11/12/2019 Hi can harry have the pokemon rowlet please just like ash frum the tv show pokemon sun and moon |
Boby335 chapter 24 . 7/14/2019 Book three and it's still looking good! Sad to see that Harry isn't keeping Aerodactyl, but equally glad too Pikachu added to his roster. Can't wait to see what book four has in store! |
Falvern chapter 23 . 12/4/2018 It was fairly obvious that Aerodactyl would be returned to Sirius at the end of the book. Harry already has a flying type in the form of Fletchinder (though far less impressive). And Aerodactyl was rightfully Padfoot's anyway I suppose. He also seems to have an interesting team forming by the way. Using Celebi in the manner that you did was quite well done. Far more preferable than having one of the main (Hermione) cast catch it at any rate. |
Falvern chapter 15 . 12/4/2018 I really like the concept behind this series. And your writing, characterization, spelling and grammar are all top notch. I'm just really not all that enthused by Harry's team. Charmeleon doesn't appear overly impressive, and I sincerely doubt Aerodactyl will be a permanent addition. Fletchinder and Pikachu are extremely fragile, especially considering the fact that the latter is so young. Talonflame and Raichu, even when fully evolved, never lose that fragility. In fact, their speed is literally the only stat they really have going for them. I know I'm overly focusing on the battling aspect of this story, but it's a hugely important aspect in the Pokémon world. And while I was honestly hoping that Harry's talent for DADA and dueling would translate over into battling in this world, this sadly doesn't seem to be the case. I'll keep an open mind for now, and hopefully the narrative will help improve my outlook on this series. |
Falvern chapter 8 . 12/4/2018 I'm honestly not sure what to really think about the inclusion of Pikachu. I'm not against it by any means. It just seems like aside from his potential Charizard, Harry's team isn't going to be overly interesting. Nor all that powerful to be perfectly honest. Not that anyone is expecting Harry to have a Champion level team or anything, but he'll need a strong team to deal with events in the future. As it stands, I do believe that Ron has the makings of a stronger team at the moment despite having a small team so far. |
Falvern chapter 4 . 12/4/2018 Ron has a surprisingly strong team for only having two Pokémon, both of which are interesting choices for him. He should probably be able to take down Harry's team with little trouble tbh. |
Lahmikhara chapter 24 . 11/23/2018 Well written, I'm going to start on the next one while I still have time before work xD |
ShadowLeafeon33 chapter 8 . 7/26/2018 Why Pikachu? |
Kittens Kat chapter 24 . 1/12/2018 I LOVED ALL OF YOUR STORIES OF THE HARRY POTTER / POKEMON CROSSOVERS! I started reading and could not stop! So here is where I leave my review. I am now on the edge of my seat waiting for the next installment of your stories! I truly enjoyed reading all of them! Thank you for all of your hard work and I can not wait for what you will come up with next! |
WarsOfShadows chapter 24 . 1/10/2018 So, part three comes to an end... It's a shame Fletchinder is staying at Hogwarts, but it's for the best. I will be faithfully awaiting The Trials of Champions! |
Guest chapter 24 . 1/9/2018 Awesome chapter! I feel bad for Harry having to leave Fletchinder at Hogwarts but it's for the best. Hopefully the teachers take that incedint into account and make the game safer to play and actually postpone games when a thunderstorm hits. I love that Hermione got a Misdreaveus. Awww my theory about Crookshanks was wrong. Oh well. See you in "Harry Potter and the trials of champions"! |
Guest chapter 23 . 1/6/2018 I know Kreachure isn't introduced into the story until book five but I was wondering if he was going to make an appearance, and if he is I thought he could be a Mr. Mime. Sence house elves are brownie fairies Kreachure being a psychic Fairy type would suet him. Kreachure could even be Regulus Blacks starter Pokemon. I would also like to know if my theory about Crookshanks being one of Regulus' Pokemon is right. I can't wait to see what happens next! |
Sunshine chapter 23 . 1/6/2018 A great chapter. Keep up the good work. |
Guest chapter 23 . 1/5/2018 Awesome chapter! I'm surprised that Gallade was able to hurt Dusknoir that much sence psychic types are weak to ghost types he must be a really high level. I think Luna should have a jinx and a Florgess on her team in your next story. |
WarsOfShadows chapter 20 . 12/30/2017 Honestly, I didn't get how Peter transformed back into his Rattata form without the needed syringe. Welp, I hope you cover that somewhere, whether it be authors note or the story itself. Besides that piece of confusion, this story is going pretty well for my liking. |