It was fun for the ten seconds the story lasted, but I'm not sure why you've marked this as complete. This obviously isn't.. so unmark it.

That was hell of an awkward moment there with Harry in the middle of everything.

This is fun, hopefully Harry doesn't end up in a situation he can't talk himself out of!

please continue this story :)

(Sorry I've forgotten my pw...) I think you've got the characterisation and deadpan delivery of the characters down; just really hoping for more to come. And yes, Harry was absolutely not the best student, so of course he messes up on non-battle charms. Maybe he could showcase his housekeeping charms to the duo when they set up camp? Idk.

I really enjoyed this! this was really good. would actually like to see what happens next if you ever feel like expanding it. if you don't, that's cool too. I just really enjoyed their interactions and it would be fun to see what happens next

love and muses xo

I wish that you would just make a story out of this because it’s just so interesting already

love to read a sequel to this!

I love the detail and dialogue. It is UNIQUE! Please update.

I'M SO GLAD I CAME TO CHECK OUT YOUR OTHER FIC BC THIS IS A GIFT. Harry, you have no idea exactly how deep of sh*t you're in at the moment. And bless Shisui and Itachi (probably my favorite ninja duo).
"Keep your blood inside you" INDEED.
Harry... just... please don't die.

I'd be interested in reading more if you decide to add more to this.

If you ever feel like writing more... I'd love to read itand thanks, it's exactly what I was looking for right now.

Aww, you tease. I would have like to read more.

Beautiful, I would love to read more!

I love your writing style. I'd love to see more from you