If you want to betray our trust that okay. Leave and Never Come back or apologize

I think this situation has been hanging over you for a long time Miss.
Sorry english is not my first language
You have over the years taken the very big f** head. You even called yourself LillySAMA or QUENNFLUFF ... You self proclaimed GOXVI pairing specialist and it was stuffy, disturbing.
You started in 2007 either. I read fanfictions in English but also in French and Spanish for more than that and I have seen much better than yours that have long remained in my head (example Blanqueraq is a genious, Benzi is refreshing and humble and for French fiction I think about ancient authors like Hel14 especially , erwann, mitsouko or Timelan still active on this site). So you have to go down a little, you are not the only girl in the world to know perfectly the subject and to give joy to readers. And respect people, especially. A fanfic writer writes first for himself, to put on paper his dreams and his frustrations, he does it for free to participate in a dynamic. If you are waiting for glory go on a train with a paper and a pencil and wait for the "magic JKRowling" to act on you, BUT you do not deserve it, not with this state of mind and you would be disappointed anyway to see that being a writer is not an easy status.
You have not renewed yourself, there was nothing magical in your last fictions, nothing surprising. It was always the same thing. To have read a lot of you I preferred your beginnings, it was more spontaneous, more humble, less calculated and less already seen. You have gone through your ideas, you have not taken any risk and I think you know it otherwise you would not have threatened your readers. You reap what you have sown. it's super stupid because you had tons of more reviews ... obviously not enough for your ego. You sabotaged yourself, nobody else is responsible .Good road to you

I'm highly disappointed that you wouldn't punish us because you thunk You lack feedback.. .. You are Demanding Feedback and We are Giving you that.. YoubShould be more Greatful to The Reviewers Taking their Time To Review this Story.. You Betrayed your Fans To Spite A Few Trolls

Why Did Abadon This Story. Why Did you move it?

Would it be on another site? You should still leave it here incomplete or not.

This was petty, but thanks for sharing what you wrote. Your stories are pretty much what got me into this stuff so it's sad to see you go.

Also just because a few people said something mean you are offended and disgusted?! I'm kinda surprised by this, I mean like hundreds of positive feedback doesn't mean a thing? I'm honestly bewildered by how long you've managed to write fanfiction on this site then as I'm sure you would have gotten many good as well as bad reviews. They didn't made you leave this site, so the few now? Don't mind me just trying to figure out everything and grieving the loss of my beloved story.

I really don't know what to say anymore, YOU just HAD to remove this why? I mean removing only two of your stories doesn't make any sense, (which ofcourse had to include my favourite one of all time) ,but sigh, I do see your reasons. I never thought that someone who has been writing fanfiction for such a long time would do such thing. I thought that you had experienced everything good and bad on this site by now and nothing would have made you leave it, but how wrong I was. Look I'm not bashing you or anything okay, but it's just that for the past couple of months you seemed quite strange, and I don't know if something has happened in your life but I don't think giving people an ultimatum to review was a good thing.
There are literally plenty of others ways to ask for feedback (which I'm really sorry to say you weren't, I don't think you even cared what was written and was just focusing it to reach a certain target) . Writers always encouraged their readers to leave reviews, never threaten them.
I was laughing hysterically when I saw this was deleted! And that's what you get to be attached with something so much. Anyways I hope you are happy (genuinely, don't think it as sarcasm)
and will continue to share your stories with your friends because you're a fantastic writer.
P.S- why didn't you deleted all of your stories then, why only this and EL?

Don’t quite remember if I reviewed this chapter already or not but it was great. It was refreshing to see Videl being able to finally accept Gohan’s feelings and be able to reciprocate them without any fear or repercussion. Also I like how this chapter is a very huge contrast to the old version of this story. Because if my memory serves me correctly in the old version I don’t believe Videl ever reunited with her dad, and in this she did. Which I thought was very touching and something that Videl’s character needed in order to realize that she wasn’t as alone as she thought she was. Can’t wait for the next update!

PS
I don’t know if my opinion will have much weight to it but you’re an amazing writer. From your plot development to your dialogue format, it’s all fucking amazing. I know you probably don’t get the credit you deserve for writing multiple stories at a time that even though are all (or mostly) about two characters you’re still able to make them unique and have such diverse plots. But I just want you to know that your stories are the best that I’ve read on this site, and I don’t believe asking for reviews is terrible or selfish, it’s natural and I’m sure it helps you become a better writer in general. Anyway enough blabbering from me please continue the great work you do and I hope to see more updates from you! :) Have a great day

Awwww Trunks friends are so adorable. Good job!

Welp, I guess I'm way past due to leave a review on this story, considering this is the second time I've read it. I actually stumbled across the original version a few years ago, but I never quite got caught up as life got busy. Then when I recently remembered about To See You Again and came back to finish it and saw you'd rewritten it, I was pretty excited for a new version as well. I generally don't leave reviews on stories that already have quite a few chapters until I get to the most recent one, as I usually read several in a row and don't want to drop, like, a dozen reviews all at nearly the same time? (I also often read on my mobile but I hate trying to type on there.) But I do like giving feedback, and if you like getting it regardless I'm happy to oblige!

Onto the story itself... In my humble opinion, compared with what I recall of the previous version (which was still well written!) I really enjoyed the change in the flow of the story here in the rewrite. While the focus is still Videl and Gohan's relationship, the pacing of other factors in the plot feels faster and tidier. The addition of Mark's presence is something I really liked, as it ads another piece in the narrative to keep things moving until Bulma finishes constructing the weapon. Videl also seems more likable in this version-she gets a piece of hope that creates a persuasive reason to allow herself to go back to Gohan after she gets her father back, rather than not just being able to resist Gohan though she kept turning him away as in the original. I also think you've done the characterization of the Androids more justice by showing the extent of their cruelty. Trunks is still as precious as always, and as with my point about Videl, Gohan also feels like a stronger character in that he's doing pretty well in sticking to the promises he makes and not pursuing Videl when she makes it clear she doesn't want him around.

For the last few chapters in particular, I have no idea how canon compliant you're planning on having events but when Videl went to Gohan's house and he wasn't there, I was terrified that *that* scene was going to be coming, but then I realized Gohan still had both arms and then I got worried that *other* scene was coming... After the fact I remembered that Trunks' age didn't line up for the timing, but the tension was written strongly enough that I genuinely didn't know what was going to happen. And Gohan and Videl reuniting in this chapter was very sweet, although I have a suspicion their carelessness in the bedroom will lead to a new concern, whether that be a new factor in Videl's fear of having something new to get attached to and potentially lose... or the actual addition of a certain little girl that would raise the stakes even further.

All in all, fanfiction is something you're taking your valuable time and skill to create for free, so it would be understandable if a lack of feedback led you to decide to keep the fruit of your efforts to yourself. I really appreciate a well-written story, in an original work or otherwise, so while I've loved reading TSYA I definitely wouldn't blame you if you decided to quit posting online. Whatever you decide to do, keep up the good work and even if it's just for the eyes of your inner circle, don't quit writing when you've got such a talent for it!

The end of this chapter makes me pretty nervous. As more people learn more about their secret weapon, it becomes more likely that the androids will learn about it. Once they know, they will attack Bulma as the threat she is. That means Gohan will end up dying protecting her. That would leave Videl forgetting about the possibility of getting pregnant and she’ll end up alone with Gohan’s child (Pan or whoever).
Unless you are going to spear off in an entirely new, and as far as I’m aware, unexplored direction and have Gohan use Bulma’s, Chichi’s and Trunk’s deaths as the impetus for Gohan to ascend to the next level. At that point the androids wouldn’t stand a chance. Even though it would end with Gohan and Videl together and the androids gone, it would be marred by the loss of Gohan’s only family and links to his past. Sort of a hollow and painful happy ending.
No matter where you go with it, I know it will be phenomenal. Keep at it and don’t give up on me, or the rest of the fanfic community!

Yeah! they finally are together offiacilly, but the most beatiful part of this chapter was all the times they said I love you. I really enjoyed this chapter, was so emotive and loving. There's no doubt, they were born to each other. :')

Loving this version as much as the original. Some chapters, like this one, more.

Thanks for the update! Been waiting for a while and look forward to the next one