| Reviews for We Move Forward |
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   emilyhotchner-olicity-bethyl chapter 5 . 9/26/2018 Hoping that you'll continue this story. This is brilliant! Love your writing! |
| emilyhotchner-olicity-bethyl chapter 4 . 9/26/2018 I SHIP THEM |
| emilyhotchner-olicity-bethyl chapter 3 . 9/26/2018 So sweet! My children! Who were those people tho? They seem like bad news |
| emilyhotchner-olicity-bethyl chapter 2 . 9/26/2018 WHAT ?! IS SHE OKAY?! WHAT HAPPENED?! |
| emilyhotchner-olicity-bethyl chapter 1 . 9/26/2018 OH WHAT?! ERIC HAS A BROTHER?! THIS IS AMAZING ! LOVE THE DEVELOPMENT! LOVE THE CHARACTERS! |
| JaiCourtneylover chapter 4 . 3/21/2018 Please don't let Lena die Eric and her could be so good |
| HairoOokami chapter 5 . 3/15/2018 I love your story, I can not wait to see more :) |
| Secret world chapter 1 . 1/8/2018 Please please hurry and update! I’m so hooked on your story! I need to read more! Like NOW! Please update soon! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/24/2017 Oh ma lord! Please update |
| CynDLou12 chapter 4 . 12/15/2017 I like that Eric isn't the complete stoic, ruthless, emotionally closed off person most Author's portray him as. I like that he has friends (Will, Four). At least they were referred to as his friends in this chapter. I like Lena's compassion for others. Strangely enough I am also intrigued by Peter's portrayal in this fanfic. I'm curious to find out what the Factionless are planning against Dauntless. I'm completely enthralled with how Lena is slowly (unbeknownst to her) cracking away at Eric's standoff-ish demeanor and into his heart. Yay! Eric is personally training Lena. I laughed when I realized she grabbed Eric's jacket when she fled from the training room. Thank you for the acknowledgement I can understand your frustration with the lack of reviews and follows on this fanfic. You take time from everyday busy life and share this with us and reviews and likes drive you to want to post more. I can't comment for others but I truly enjoy reading your work. Thank you for sharing. |
| tlcoopi7 chapter 4 . 12/13/2017 To be honest, Trump wanted to destroy everything that Obama worked for such as getting rid of the Affordable Care Act and now net neturality. Even the people that he picked to the Cabinet have absoluty no experience in their areas, especially DeVoss. |
| laser97 chapter 4 . 12/13/2017 I love this story. Keep writing. |
| StudyInBlack chapter 4 . 12/13/2017 Hi, so far this story sooo good! Keep up the good work :) |
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/12/2017 Enjoying the story a lot so far! It's a fresh take on the usual initiation story. Also, love the new characters and how Dauntless training is changed. |
| storygirl6998 chapter 4 . 12/12/2017 don't stop. its a good story. constant praise shouldn't be what drives a writer; passion for writing should be the driver. trust yourself, you are good. |
