as much as i wish u would update this, its been 8 years so i doubt u will

Not to be a downer here, the story is a good read, but I have some problems with it. First off this story would be much more enjoyable if you used proper grammar, spelling "you" and "are" instead of "u" and "r". Another thing (this is just a minor annoyance) Celtic Guardian isn't a light monster, he is an earth monster. Other than that good story.

I hope that they try and free her, afterall she did get in trouble trying to help them

Please update soon! This is an awesome Story!

I want the pairs to be Mystic elf/Celtic Guardian and Dark Magician/Dark Magician girl (romanticially), But I want Dark Magician to fight for her romanticially with Dark Magician of Black Chaos or Black Luster Soldier.

I want there to be Celtic/Mystical and Dark Magician/Dark Magician girl in the romance pairs.

I do want Dark Magician to fight for her (romanticially) with another Dark Magician and Black Luster Soldier. Or Just Black Luster Soldier.

Please update Soon!

I want there to be Celtic/Mystical and Dark Magician/Dark Magician girl in the romance pairs.

I do want Dark Magician to fight for her (romanticially) with another Dark Magician and Black Luster Soldier. Or Just Black Luster Soldier.

Please update Soon!

Celtic Guardian/Mystical Elf as a pair and Dark Magician Girl and Dark Magician as a pair (romanticially both).

This story is soo AWESOME and I hope that you update soon!

Get mystical elf and Celt together ! I think it will cute ! Please continue !

I am sorry I am writing anouther comment but I forgot to say stuff in the last one. First I like the way you made the Dark Magician very cold. In other romance stories between the Dark Magicain and Dark Magican girl they are very good but the Dark Magician is not cold enough. Second mabey you should make the Black Luster Soilder fall in love with the Dark Magician girl and the Dark Magicin starts getting very jelous. Third you should use real words instead of "r" and "u". No offence but it gets very distracting. Fourth the Mystical Elf and the Celtic Gauridian should save the Dark Magician Girl. Fifth mabey there should be a suprising kiss the Dark Magician gives the Dark Magician Girl. It would be very romantic. Sixth sorry I am leaving you a very long list but the red Dark Magician mabey should fall in love with the Dark Magician. ( Black Luster Soilder or red Dark Magician would be good considering they are both handsom). Seventh I am also writing a love story between the Dark Magician Girl and Dark Magician. I don't want my story to have to much puppy love because that gets boring after awhile. Can you leave some comments and suggestions for mw plese. Ok that is all I have to say. Post a new chapeter soon!

The mystical elf and celtic gaurdin should be an engaged couple. It seems nice because they are one of the comest monsters in the game. Also I want to know what the Dark Magician thinks of the dark magician girl. They are one of my favorite couples in all of the manga/anime world.

maybe they go and save dmg? nice story, so will dark mage punish her?

its a really great story_... why stop? and as fer the parings... um... wing weaver and harpie's bro?

I have to ask. Why does the Celtic Guardian live in the light monster realm, when he is an Earth monster?

Also, please use proper grammer. Subsituting 'are' with 'r' is just annoying.

Other than that, you have quiet a good premice for a story, though I doubt Dark Magician would be so cruel and callous.

As for CG and ME, I'm not sure what you should do with them.

As for other couplings. Amazoness Swordswoman and Breaker the Magical Swordsman.

W hat about Dark Paladi or Neo the Magic Swordsman I loved it keep going don't let writers block get to you

I think Celtic Guardian and Mystical Elf should try to save the Dark Magician Girl and while they're trying to sneak around the Dark Realm and find her, Dark Magician Girl could be being yelled at and punished by her Master. Dark Magician Girl escapes, runs into Celtic Guardian and Mystical Elf and then the trio goes back to the Light Realm where Dark Magician Girl has to deal with betraying her master and at the same time she is being shunned by the light monsters.

I hope this helps even a little. I'm not very good with plots, I usually just wing-it. Update soon please.