take your time:)

I would love to see more of matthew in it

I love if you make a chapter in matthew thought have the school to find out what he is

Matthew

Imma bout to cut a bitch

Holy shit O.o Alistor you ass!
Poor Arthur, poor Mattie, poor Hannah, poor everyone! I really hope they don’t try to kill each other in the frost...

Hahaha! That food fight! Just, Arthur and Francis duelling with baguettes has to be the best thing ever!
And oh shit, Al what’s happened to you?

OMG that was hilarious O.o horse Arthur kicks serious butt I love it. :D and punk Arthur gets all the girls

This was a lot of exposition

I've only just found this story, and my word am I glad I did. I really like this. It's interesting and well written. I like it. You ought to keep writing it.

Hello! Sounds really cool. Could I make a few suggestions? It sounds like you have a very-developed world in mind for this, and you are eager to explain it. However, it should be explained more in the story itself than in extra notes so readers can remember it through experience. The little historical myth from the last chapter was a great integration of your ideas that was easy to understand and not overwhelming.
Something I do in my writing is reinforcing an idea through repetition. For instance, in my AU, Feliciano is a fairy, so I regularly refer to his wings to create a visual. Maybe you could try doing this with Alfred or your other monsters so they are easy to imagine.
For the world parts, I’d just describe them as you go along. Find ways to feather them into the story. Maybe have some characters reacting to a mention of one of the worlds or creatures like they did after Alfred read about the Icarus Society. Maybe there’s a map in one of the classrooms of the Forgotten and Frost and so on.
Good luck with future chapters! I am looking forward to more.

Whoa, you update fast!
Yes, yes, a thousand times yes! Scotland, Wooo!
Okay I’ll calm down now. But honestly this is so interesting. I wanna know what’s going on. I wannna knnnnoooowwww!

I really love the way this story is going so far, can't wait for more my dude!

Oohhh the plot thickens. And what are you talking about? This is great! Keep it up!

Could you do a chapter in Mathews point of view?