love!

Wow this is a really good I love Anne shes such a realistic character. Some times when you read stories with this type of plot the way the oc maneuvers through gothem can be very unrealistic but this is really good. Im officially addicted. I hope an update comes soon.

This fic is so interesting! I really do feel like I’m watching a sort of mental game of chess, except all the players make mistakes and get caught up in other things. It’s very very interesting. I wondered about the Rachel Dawes scenario- it was a good piece to put in here, and I wonder how it will effect future interactions. I was so excited to see you’d updated haha! Anyway, as always thank you for writing.

Omg you updated, I’ve had this story saved and when I got the notification I did a little happy dance! As always, great writing

I really like how unique this fic is!

Yes this is an amazing fic!

I love that part where she said her piece to rachel, she is right though people shouldnt judge others without taking in the factors that are affecting the situation a person is in. Its been a while since you've updated any of your stories Im glad that you still took time to update it and not abandoning it, I hope you're doing good. especially with the situation the world is in now, do take time for yourself and if you do feel like writing I hope you take your time as well especially for this fanfic this one is not just something that anyone should do in haste, its complicated, sophisticatedly well done. take care and hope you the best of luck in your life

anne's home country was a surprise I thought maybe some hispanic country but philippines mind blown she's a filipina as well. you've done this good this is one of your best fanfic yet, love the interactions and monologues, I really love it!

This is ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! I just found this and can't wait until the next update.

Man, I really liked the use of "my parents aren't home" meme. Such a classic. A very funny image to have stuck in your head, too.

So I suppose that Anne revealed her secret because she realized there was not much to lose at this point, being trapped and all that, but that the information that Crane provided her could aid her in their battle of wits and whatnot? I guess it had to eventually happen, but I'm not really understanding what changed aside from that? (I mean, she was still trying to keep her secrets under covers last time, when they kissed, which I think hadn't been too long ago?). Also: Kissing Cillian Murphy. Props to my girl. It's insane "technically-not-Cillian-Murphy" Cillian Murphy , yes, but it still counts.

I see that you're using the abusive granny version of the story? Did the Sherry incident also happen in this timeline? (I think she was called Sherry? The girl Jonathan had a crushed on in highschool, who ended up playing that cruel prank on him). If that's the case, oof boy, dude might be a bit more prickly than she expected, given his pasts experiences with the women in his life. All my best wishes go to Anne. Although maybe the plan is gonna go better than expected? It certainly helps that his knowledge and attitude towards attraction didn't evolve past his teenage years, making it unexplored territory to him. Anne has certainly that advantage.

Anyways, I know you don't update this story that much but it's always great to see an update. Thanks for taking the time to write this and have a good week!

Love it

Ahhhhhh! What a solid way to end that chapter! My mouth dropped open like I was physically just shocked. The name makes a lot of sense :) I’ve actually studied scent before so as I was reading your reasoning I was nodding along going hmmm yep. This was a good chapter I can definitely see why you could feel the want to write it for fun since it was a really fun chapter. As we were getting bits of scarecrows history I was just going hmmm and realising I know absolutely none of his history anyway haha. But yeah that really does seem like the cliche traumatised childhood of a villain—it’s good that Anna could recognise that since it means she’s probably not sympathising with him yet so that’s probably best for her mental state. Anyway, thanks for writing since I really enjoyed reading!

I read this story awhile ago and really enjoyed it. At the time I didn't save it anywhere so I forgot its details, recently I was stuck for awhile trying to remember something so I could find it again. Thankfully, I have, so I can enjoy rereading and rereading. Thank you for writing this, I know what it's like to just not update a story for awhile so no pressure from me to update haha.

oh I like this! Its different.

Really cannot wait for more! I really like this!