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   Sourlander chapter 37 . 7/27/2019 I never understood why the Daedalus-class ships and the Prometheus had such terrible wiring. One small hit and everything on those ships just explodesP But now to the story and my final review. I loved every minute and every sentence. You're an incredible writer with so much more to tell! You made me feel so invested in the story and the characters and your language skills (Spanish, Texan accents when needed just being two examples) are incredible. Thank you so much for writing this story and for posting it! Can't wait for more Tempus Fugit! |
| Sourlander chapter 36 . 7/27/2019 One day. Good for her. This fight was really satisfying to read. The fact that not all was just forgiven, but that she got angry and offensive was just perfect. I mean, I understand why Ronon did what he did, but Emma was totally right. |
| Sourlander chapter 35 . 7/26/2019 Yes, tell her the truth. He really, REALLY deserved that Hangover. And it's time she started talking about Allie... And I really, really, really don't want this story to end! |
| Sourlander chapter 34 . 7/26/2019 I love that she thinks of him as "her Ronon". But their reunion made me a tiny bit anxious. Drunk Ronon is no fun, but how was he supposed to know she'd come back? |
| Sourlander chapter 33 . 7/26/2019 Sam! I loved her little talk with Emma anf the advice she gave her. It tells so much about her! And Emma tidying up Daniel's office was fun. That poor fellow. He's not gonna like this. Oh, and of course the connection she drew between the Asgard device and the Ancient device was brilliant! |
| Sourlander chapter 32 . 7/26/2019 This was so exhilarating! Sorry, got to keep reading! |
| Sourlander chapter 31 . 7/26/2019 Another excellent chapter! The transition betweem action sequence (which was really well done!) and the dream was perfectly and seamlessly executed. Perfect! |
| Sourlander chapter 30 . 7/26/2019 Can I just say... MAJOR DAVIS \oThey're probably gonna find someone else who can speak Spanish". I love that man I really REALLY like this pace! Can't wait to read more! I love how you got Emma back to the SGC |
| Sourlander chapter 29 . 7/26/2019 I really liked the pacing in this chapter! The story is really picking up |
| Sourlander chapter 28 . 7/26/2019 Michelle is such a cool character! I really like how she still takes care of her little sister and won't let go. And it's so good that Emma finally talks about this and gets told by someone who isn't involved that Ronon was probably just being stupidP |
| Sourlander chapter 27 . 7/26/2019 Finally the fight I've been waiting for! What was that about truth serum? A truly breathtaking scene! The two of them shouting at each other in front of John was such a relief. Ronon being so unfair really made ME want to punch him. Emma being so angry about the message was pretty great too! Argh! Great chapter! |
| Sourlander chapter 26 . 7/26/2019 I really liked how oblivious John was in this one. But then again, he's not exactly the matchmaker Carter wasP |
| Sourlander chapter 25 . 7/26/2019 I loved the Spanglish! And I understood most of it! That made me so happy! Ronon seeing Allie for the first time! I loved him looking into Michelle's eyes first and then comparing them to Allie's! Such a heartbreaking moment! |
| Sourlander chapter 24 . 7/26/2019 Yeeeehaw! That would've been a cool chapter title too!P Can't wait to read about their reunion and the awkwardness and the anger! Yeehaw! |
| Sourlander chapter 23 . 7/26/2019 Oh Ronon, you didn't! Sneaky! What I really liked about this chapter was that we have no idea where they're going. Ha! Lines? what lines?! More! |
