Reviews for The Mary Sue who doesn't want to be a Mary Sue
WHY chapter 40 . 7/5/2011
*screams and pulls at hair* OMG...YOU ARE EVIL~! WHYYYY! NUUUU. LEGOLASSSSS.
I'm Not an Elf I'm a Goblin chapter 8 . 7/5/2011
Brian should have SO gone with Frodo and Sam. Better that way, I think. :D Makes a good chance for some Leggy-mance. *snort*
Raised Eyebrow chapter 2 . 7/5/2011
...'A few weeks'.

She's been reading about him for over a week and she's only gotten so far into the first book? Wow...I hope that she just doesn't have the time to read and it isn't because she's too 'slow'. lol

Plot hole...oh, and why didn't Scott react to his erection? Those things are hard to get rid of, or does he possess an on and off switch the rest of us don't? Really...those things are hard to get rid of, it'd be awesome to get one.

He must be used to getting a jimmy in front of his female friend...whoa, says a bunch about their relationship. lol
Aquatic-Idealist chapter 40 . 5/20/2008
You probably won't read this, as judging from your fic's status you haven't been on this site for years, but I thank you for this fic. Awesome, purely awesome! To tell the truth, the greatest of writers leave their readers at the end imagining what their heroes will do next. I don't think this fic needs a sequel, it's that good!
Aquatic-Idealist chapter 30 . 5/20/2008
Well, I don't know if you'll ever read this, but, by the gods, this was one truly epic line:

""It will give you a reason to fight," Hanalee whispered absentmindedly. "Fight to reach the ones you love. And then never let them go once you find them.""

Excellent, madam!
Aquatic-Idealist chapter 20 . 5/20/2008
"Legolas grinned but never lost his focus, "How could you pronounce your love in the middle of a war?""

Ahem, Legolas has just insulted the spirit of Fire Emblem.

But, never mind that. Awesome fic! I will leave a more in-depth review later.
TOFTS chapter 40 . 2/17/2007
loved the story! at the beginning it was so-so, but it grew on me. it's nice seeing a story where legolas and mary-sue don't fall in love :) though you have to admit, having her fall in love with her older brother's best friend whom she can't stand is a *bit* cliched...but still, great story!
Pippin the hobbit-elf chapter 2 . 7/29/2004
i know that you may find this odd, but since you said at the begining of this chapter that is was serious, i was laughing the whole way through. Yes, you are very good at wrtiting humor, although i am probably right in guessing that not all of this story is funny...hm, well, off to read the rest!
loveroflegolas chapter 40 . 6/19/2004
OMG its over! i love u, this story, gah i love u so i reely reely want u 2 kno that ur an amazing writer and if u dont continue i shall send my mini balrogs on u jk lyl
KnowInsight chapter 40 . 6/16/2004
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Very good story luv.

I enjoyed it a lot.

I hope you and your Dad do better.

Am )
theywouldntletmedeletethis chapter 40 . 6/15/2004
Very nice. I'm glad it's done. You finished it well. Good job, it's been a great journey.

L.
Crecy chapter 40 . 6/13/2004
*Snifle* That was so GREAT! It was an amazing story and I loved it! I'm glad to have found the story so I could read it and enjoy it! By the way, as for the summer, I'm out in three days. It depends on what school district your in when you get out. I can't wait to be free!
assssd chapter 40 . 6/12/2004
aw this is such a cute ending!

i really cannot wait for more
Oil Pastel chapter 40 . 6/12/2004
... :) That was great hun. Perfect way to end it. I just loved the whole thing :D I dont really know what else to say, other than help you make up your mind about a sequel. You can tell me what you think about doing the sequel or not in your enail back to me :P lol, its your turn _

Wonderful story, it couldn't have been written any better.

Love ya

Sara x x x
taryn huntre chapter 40 . 6/11/2004
this was such a great story! i wish could write like you. when i wrote the first part of my story, i didnt intend to turn it into a MS, but somehow it ended up like that. but n/e wz! if you write another story, i'll definitely check it out!
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