This chapter makes me uncomfortable, nothing here makes sense, there's no reference of speed in the notebook, suddenly bas wants nick to know? It feels unnatural with no connection, now I do like the direction it went in I just feel like the reasons were just thrown in.

Hola ¿queria saber por que has borrado tu cuenta de ao3? ¿planeas abandonar todas tus historias? por que eso seria algo terriblemente deprimente.
Por favor danos una respuesta a tus lectores, cob el mayor respeto y saludos.

Why'd you stop writing this. It's really well done. I'd you aren't going to update could you at least put an update in the story saying that this is an incomplete fanfiction

This is such a good chapter, you are staying canon, but still manage to keep it your own story

I love your story, update soon! The pacin is very well written

This sucks.

Ok, I get what you are going for. But I kinda think Barry is wrong for being upset with Sebastion in this case. I mean, his brother promised him he would stop messing with other people and all of that. but, Santana and the rest of the Mckinley gang approached them and started trouble in the first place and Sebastion was defending himself. He hasn't bothered them or been mean to them or anything since Barry has gotten back from the hospital, so how can Barry come at him about being mean to other people when Sebastion didn't start the interaction in the first place?

I hope that made sense, it seems like it doesn't. But I really do enjoy this story. I look forward to the rest of it.

Yass

This whole fanfic always ends in cliff hangers XD

Shit! Shit! Shit! What is it with YOU and CLIFFHANGERS?!

Love it your back this is my fav crossover

good Chapter

Glad you're back! Cute Chapter!

COME BACK TO ME!

hmm...
okeey...?
I like that Sebby cares about Barry but the New Directions are assholes too so
maybe Barry can see 2 different points of view
and Seb in stage too