great action. I couldn't stop reading these last few chapters

I'm betting this was written. somewhere near the Southern border of the US, like Texas or NM. it has a HS Southwest vibe. does the UK have taco trucks?

sometimes this reads like this was written by someone translating a story into English. small strange grammar, and things like "courses" instead of period or cycle or monthly...

sweet. I like that Draco is trying to make up for his poor behavior and woo her

I like this fic.
I don't like Hermione's clingyness and insecurities taking over. or how she constantly returns to Draco despite him not changing. it's unusual that the war didn't change his opinions and stance on his family.
but the writing is good, so l will keep reading.

nice opening chapter

Okay so i am enjoying the story so far i like the plot and the pairings and i like how things are going with the plot . i'll admit i thought of abandoning the story more than once mostly cause i hate drama between Draco and Hermione but i seriously thought of quitting when Hermione found out she was pregnant then i decided i'd read the reviews and see what people were saying then decide wether i should continue or not so when i read that she lost the baby i have to say i felt relived i never liked stories that are Dramione yet had one or the other with a child and/or married and whenever i stumbled upon one i would just ignore seeing it all together and i am excited to see what comes next and how they deal with Lucius when they find out about him and what will they do about Narcissa .

I love all the pairings. The plot was great too. I was kept on my toes for the first few chapters, what with Draco behaving the way he did in regards to his relationship. Happy for Astoria and Pansy at the end, and love how Ron felt that he and Hermione had to go through all that to be where they are in the end. Love it, binge-read it in a day

Oh, Nev and Theo are so cheesy. I'm glad they finally got to talk, because I was getting tired of their using sex to distract from/ fix their relationship problems. It's not always about sex. Now if only Draco and Hermione could fix their own relationship...

To be honest, reading this, I can really relate to Hermione. I have had this happen to me too. Not with my ex essentially date-raping me, but with someone I'd only been planning to have a fling with, someone who was supposed to have just been harmless, consequence-less fun. We'd gone on maybe three or four booty calls over two or three months, I don't quite recall anymore, but then I found out I was pregnant. I wasn't ready, I didn't want a child, I didn't even want a relationship. I panicked, considered quitting work, considered suicidethis was how much being pregnant upset me. So when I miscarried a few weeks later I felt so relieved, and then guilty because I was happy that the baby had died. I felt like a murderer gloating over a victim, and yet I couldn't help but be glad that I wouldn't have to face the problem of birthing and raising a child I didn't want and wasn't ready for. I know that some people really want a child but cannot have one, but I didn't and still don't want a child and I can't really change that.

I would like to ask for your permission to make Draco's house (flat?) on SIMS. You've described everything so nicely, I think I can make it! I need a break from decorating Malfoy Manor, the damn thing's humongous.

What a wonderful story! Thanks so much for sharing it with us all!

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Thank you for writing this.

Okay I normally don’t review till the end but my god, DAPHNE AND GEORGE! I think I have a new side pairing. Absolutely beautiful!

WHAT. THE. FRICK.

Ok. I knew I didn't like Lucius but this made me want to use the killing curse myself.