dude i love interview with a vampire its my favorite movie and book... dude ir you want to see me go on youtube and look up this...JAYLA MEETS PAPA ok i got a couple more its all i ask for my birth day is feb 23 so comment and tell me happy birth day thanks buddy ohhh yaaa im jayla on it so ya thanks:]

Think you could...uh...make a part 2? :)

This wasn't what I was expecting really. When you have more than one person speaking, do not put the dialoge into one paragraph. Space it out such as this:

" "

" "

Not "" "" "".

It tends to become hard to read and readers will get lost with who is speaking.

Use more details about surroundings, and make sure your spelling is correct.

Well done, though you really shouldn't distract me like that at work - I couldn't stop reading.

damn girl can you write a book or what? i just found your book and finished it in one day! i am a huge vampire fan and an even bigger fan of vampire fiction. cant wait to read your next book!

Vampire's Kisses 4 Me

p.s.

what happened when kai came back? did they have this huge reunion or something? i mean two lover being away from each other and then suddenly eeing each other after such a long period of time as got to be alittle emotioal right? email me back i would love to get some tips from you- i am currently writing a book of my own.

Wow! This was an amazing story. I hope Silverstorms puts out a sequel!

hey it's okay but i see not reason why he was intrigued. The vamp should have gave a peice of what her lived like and really get the reporter's attention...but perhaps i misread somethin...i am interested on where you might go with it.

hey nice storie i like it keep writing

Ok... I am not usually ne to do this, but I think you understand. WHY THE HELL WOULD YOU END A STORY LIKE THAT! Its a great, excellent, amazing, beautifull, creative story! It can't end like that. Why, oh why must you torment me? Please? *looks at with puppy dog eyes* For me? Ah, shoot. I know you won't, no matter how hard I try. *scowls* I ask you with all the emotion in my heart... PLEASE CONTINUE! .'

Aw... ts ok. I used to luv Xena! I was ike... 7 lst time i saw it... Oh, yeh... AWSOME SO FAR!

yay! awesome story! I love it *drools*

your writing style is breathtakingXD

ma..keep going on writing such awesome stories XD

*cuddles*

cee ya

Um out of curiosty, wasn't the book, 'Interview with a Vampire', written by Anne Rice? And according to the Story Guidelines, Anne Rice is one of the authors who has expressed their wish for no fanfics based on their work to be published on I'm just worried tha you may get in trouble, and it IS a really good story, so be careful. Hopefully, I'm wrong on the matter, but re-read the guidelines just to be sure, okay?

Praying that this story won't be taken down,

MoS

that was incredible! that will soo stay on my favs list for EVER! (huggles rei and ka) kawia!1!one! aww they got together at the end ive herd about the film, i think it has brad pit in *drools* heh heh i should really wach it wen i get the chance i will, thank you for inspiring me with ur amazing story !

yay they kissd_ i love rei/kai yoai storyies yayayay! bo stupid lei with his stupid being in the stupid way all the stupid time maybe room for lemon in later chapters lets hope gah! XD

awsome kaikaiesha told me about this she was right its great! well i have alot more chppies to read so ill be on my way! (picks up camping gear) its gonna be along trip