I loved it, it was well written.

Annnd the perfection comes to a stunning end! Both heart warming and adorable at the same time! I enjoyed reading this so much! Thanks for writing it! I appreciated it very much!

Perfection at it's best! Right here, this chapter. It contains so much thought out detail and planning...You have done some amazing things! Only one more chapter for me to read though...:(

Once again, a shocking and stunning chapter. Honestly, you're one of the best writers I've ever come across. I'm lucky I found your story. Your writing's awesome!

You've got me hooked. Then again, I was hooked by the middle of the first chapter. You've been doing an impressive amount of work..I honestly don't know how you keep writing these amazing and perfectly detailed chapters. I also love how you had Soul have depression, because I know so many people can relate to Soul during this story, and the thoughts...I happen to be one of those people. thank you, this really means a lot. 3

The detail you put into the story is fantastic! You've created a masterpiece

Stunning chapter! The description is so detailed, and i love it! You're doing some amazing work

A great story starter! It really drew me in! You just earned yourself another fan! :)

Really good and original story. Loved it! Thank you for posting these I really enjoyed reading this.

Huh, commenting on the same chapter is actually quite simple. All you need to do is refresh the page.
Anyhow, now I see what the summary was pointing to. I can only assume that Maka probably allows herself to be put in a very dangerous situation and that Soul is the one threatening her.

Great story

I can't remember when I last read this. But its great to read this again. Meaning to reread all the great stuffs anyway. Umm... So keep up the good job! Thanks for coming back.

I can't remember when I last read this. But its great to read this again. Meaning to reread all the great stuffs anyway. Umm... So keep up the good job! Thanks for coming back.