Plsssss update

Love the background on Luna ! And I’m glad we finally know what happened in manchester, but it’s actually quite sad... poor professor Ortington

good seeing XENO

I‘m really looking forward to the next chapter!

What’s the reason for Ginny’s lump in her throat ? Is it just because of what Cheryl said ?

No matter what it’s still very surprising to have TWO obscurials in the same place... I’m sure Le Ombre has something to do with it

Oh man it took so long for Harry to cast that Pom Pom spell ! And Ron really is that stupidest boy... I’m so glad he had his epiphany.

But what happened is very troublesome, another Obscurus, especially her ?! I’m sure it’s because of her Dad.

It's a bit disconcerting, but it's also refreshing. Third person omniscient is very rare, and when I do see it I normally get the sense that the author did not actually intend to be jumping back and forth between viewpoints or showing the thoughts of multiple people within a small section of text. The story flows much more smoothly when every switch of focus is planned out.

I loved Mrs Weasley’s teasing ! I just know that this is going to be an awesome year once again with Le Ombre being the vilain !

Wow things took such an interesting turn !

Good work.

Hey! Like the story but i don’t see any characters representing the lgbt. No offence but it makes the story seem unrealistic for our generation. Maybe make Cheryl lesbian? Or non-binary? Thx :)

Good job!
Just plz dont say "the girl" it was confusing which one
Looking forward for more !

Maybe with harry of with ginny, ron can mature more than he did in canon. Id like to read ron and hermione seeing as harry is spemding most of his time with ginny, i wonder how other characters will diffet from canon.

This whole story feels the wrong kind of AU to me.

A great chapter ! I’m so glad Harry and Ginny are together !