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The Shadows Mistress chapter 8 . 4/14
ok i liked this one ; a little politics here and there same people i don't like get their comeuppance so that's good; lovely looking forward to more
The Shadows Mistress chapter 7 . 4/14
ok this one was more amusing, liked it, cant say im a ron fan either. oh i know he is better in the books but meh.
The Shadows Mistress chapter 6 . 4/14
another amusing one, really love Tonks i mean who doesnt
The Shadows Mistress chapter 5 . 4/14
ok this one i liked too cute, quickly fixed stupid issues with canon that shouldnt never been a thing
The Shadows Mistress chapter 4 . 4/13
Too bad Tom, similar to the one with the gun but good. always wondered why no one did that to snatcher teams in cannon. sheeple I guess; i mean geeze Hermione got to a youth hostel
The Shadows Mistress chapter 3 . 4/13
Ok once again no clue what I read but was funny as hell thanks
The Shadows Mistress chapter 2 . 4/13
I liked this one, would be a good story too
The Shadows Mistress chapter 1 . 4/13
im not sure what i read but was pretty funny, looking forward to more
alix33 chapter 9 . 3/15
You meant "Bill's wedding".
The aural pic of Hermione's parents missing out on Australian accents and only eating shrimp only because Hermione hadn't shagged herself and Harry silly prior was very funny.
alix33 chapter 8 . 3/15
Luna meant to say "You don't like my breasts".
Harry meant to say "Thery're brilliant".
Yay! for what happened to Cornelius Fudge and Dolores Umbridge,
Damien Greengrass meant to say "wiping out the Longbottoms".
Daphne called Hermione Harry's "confidant".
Lavender "pushed past Katie".
Angelina would have said "your house's vassalage".
Ron Weasley would probably have said "Who's" instead of "Whose". He is certainly stupid enough.
Harry would have said "if she wants to".
Yurika would have said "Vane's mixture".
Romilda "pushed past her".
I loved the way Lavender banished Ron back into the wall across the corridor from The Fat Lady's portrait.
Sirius would have said "Lady Blacks' schedule"'.
Poppy Pomfrey would have said "Miss Vanes' concoction".
Minerva McGonagall would have said "Consorts' wrath".
"lit the fuse", not "lit the fuze".
Justin would have said "Potter's child".
IMO both Cho Change and Marietta Edgecomb needs some kind of cruel punishment because they let Luna be bullied in their house.
Daphne would have said "isn't she powerful too" and "whenever she sees him".
Hermione would have said "it's intent".
"male elves"', not "male elf's".
You meant "Gryffindor tower's exterior face".
You meant "her girl's cause".
alix33 chapter 7 . 3/15
You meant Luna "had to back up a bit to breathe".
You meant "four or five times a day".
You meant "Lady Potter's vicious bitch".
And "Bellatrix Black's wet nurse".
And "in the castle's top".
And "Harry's Ladies".
And "some house's Lady".
And "'Harry Potter's esssence".
And "Harry's Girl".
And "Harry's head".
alix33 chapter 6 . 3/15
You meant "One behind the other".
And "Chief Warlock's position".
Tonks meant "Hermione Granger's fantasies".
alix33 chapter 5 . 3/15
You meant "a nasal voice began".
Yay! for Harry having the Greengrass parents and Andromeda Tonks on his side.
I love the plans of the war council.
Yay! for Hermione being turned against Dumbles by dint of seeing Harry's alleged childhood memories.
You meant "into being celebrities".
You meant "toad's head".
Hermione "held Harry's arm".
You meant "Tonks' memories".
And "Gryffindors looked".
And "Professor Quirrell's head".
Dumbles said "Who was that message to?"
Way to go, Kingsley, at getting Dumbles in that flying tackle.
Cho meant to say "draws bees".
Parvati meant "Malfoy's assets".
Neville "headed for the desserts".
You meant "kind of parachute material".
Hedwig-pecked Harry was funny.
You meant "Flint's desperate eyes".
"defenestrate" is my all-time favourite English word.
Charity would have said "needs time in contact with him too".
alix33 chapter 4 . 3/15
You meant "into Riddle's service".
And "killing Riddle's supporters".
And "as he eschewed technology".
IMO it utterly sucks that Remus is infected with Dumbles disease.
Jeez, sorry, Luna!
Luna would have said "in Riddle's service".
Harry "shook Ragnok's hand".
Snape "cursed Harry Potter's name"'.
Hermione meant to say "a witch's property is her husband's".
And "he tithes to the Crown".
And "my lord's demesnes".
You meant "Riddle's first rise",
You meant "Riddle's horcrux".
alix33 chapter 3 . 3/15
I like it loads that Susan Bones used a fountain pen and not a quill.
Susan would have said "He ran past".
You meant "than his father's did".
And for Mad-Eye to say "keep Frank's wand safe".
A free range goblin upbringing sounds like fun.
You meant "for a moment too long".
You meant for Pansy Parkinson to say "he can make Parkinsons on me".
And "blue and pink body suit".
You meant for Poppy Pomfrey to say "it's too late".
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