It was so good, but also so short!
Like a pop cake!

This was an excellent dosage of smut, and the humor worked perfectly XD As much as I love romantic smut, I really do enjoy the occasional humorous kind, and yours was no exception. Loved it!

I hate the fact Inuyasha is still kykyou's doormat. Kykyou was a weakling who died fifty years ago. And fifty years later he going to kill naraku because he killed kykyou. That was his fault. Kaede has more reasons for wanting naraku died than Inuyasha. Kykyou and Inuyasha weren't even in love with each other. She was using him to get rid of the shikon no tama and him. Inuyasha was using kykyou for what she represent a place to belong. They had no trust between them. Kykyou failed when their friendship was put to the test. Onigumo tried to kill kykyou. She had no doubts Inuyasha tried to kill her. She didn't even look for proof to Inuyasha's guilt or innocence. She sealed Inuyasha an innocent person for fifty years. When she was resurrected, she showed once again her lack of doubts. She tried to attack Inuyasha with an attack arrow. She tried to take an innocent Inuyasha to hell. She gave naraku a new body. She stole the shikon shards. She tried to kill Kagome. She gave the shikon shards to naraku which powered him up and create children/slaves and kill innocent youkai and ningen people. Is kykyou in love with naraku?

LOL, I really liked this. Well done!

Great flow, and I love that they’re true to character. Mostly.

brilliant and fun and sweet

This is beautiful!

Great job at writing everyone so in-character! I'm re-reading the manga at the moment, and one thing I really wish there was more of was heart-to-heart convos.

Thanks for sharing!

This is most excellent!

Hahahahahahaaha This was awesome!

no matter what, you can always count on your friends :D

Concerning your end of story comments, I agree. Inuyasha is one of those rare series where no one is just a place holder, they're all pretty amazing. I liked this story a lot, but I can just imagine Inuyasha's embarrassed sulking for the next few days (He'd hold out for weeks if he could, but Kagome WILL pull out those pajamas if he makes her!). Thanks for posting!