This is adorable and how dare they hurt baby Dakota. Dakota’s descriptions were great and wonderful job writing Cavendish. Great job.

Small Dakota is so cute! How dare they hurt small one!

I really love this story, and I shall continue reading it several times! And I also sorta realised Dakota, while he was a kid, seemed to not make a complete sentence like the other kids. And it would be a really interesting to add to his personlity if the creators had the idea to have Dakota autistic. I also liked the idea of why he always wore his glasses (even when in the episode, 'the race' where he changed clothes to look normal in the time they were in, he still kept those glasses on) and it satisfies my question as to why he always wears it XD Thank you for the story, by the way.

The writing here was just plain good. This was a really enjoyable read and everyone felt perfectly in character! I like the style of the prose and the attention to detail in making this. I felt emotionally invested through every paragraph and it did not disappoint. I also adore the idea of Dakota having autism.

This is so sweet (both the main Babkota plot, and the revenge D) I think I got a cavity xD I LOVE IT

Loved it :)

And i've learnt somewhere that in some language 'Dakota' means 'friend'

i love choild dakota, he's so cuuuute!