Ok, I can understand why people are angry because Ruby showed that she's not really any better than her classmates... so her early entry is pure luck -.-

I'm slightly confused about the bottom AN, doesn't Jaune have like ALL the aura?

Love this. Keep up the good work.

I stumbled upon this today and it looks like a very interesting premise
but also is kind of overly structured

You having Ruby through a bunch of harassment and bullying
which would work for a while easily paste the stakes by this point

Gold's actions have gone beyond that

Were talking few chapters ago attempted murder

This one were talking aggravated assault kidnapping and yes attempted murder again

They just hinted that this chapter Huntress out aura could easily die
golden friends are trying to kill her. In the way you set up here is not going to
stop and if someone is actually hurt

You also stuck with the confines that when movie goes to Beacon she still to be happy and
want to write back her friends at old school. Right now I don't see that happening she's
got maybe one friend left

I honestly see no way that things can turn around enough that we would forgive the others
well past the line at this point. What Maggie did cannot be forgiven
nor whether other former friend did
at this point you've already well-established what people are doing the Ruby
is not much more darker you can go unless you plan to write a tragedy here,

You've also put yourself in a sticky situation if you give no reckoning what just happened
and you might lose the readers confidence that's all pointless. On the other hand if you
building too much more classic showdown will have to do hell of a fancy

To keep the readers from feeling jerked around.

My personal prediction it comes down to a firefight someone will actually die I'm thinking Maggie
or gold will be to survive has to fight back and up destroying the school
or will rubies sadness in a massive grim attack. Either way it's a miniature version of
the battle of Beacon

Also some of the older students confront Yang. Yang into fighting them having to hurt some
of them. Person I could see someone gain crippled and someone possibly dying

In the end the authorities come with it all out my vote is the headmaster of Beacon
any essentially expels the people there were tormenting Ruby makes it clear they can never apply
to Beacon. One of rubies former friends loses her aura and hence cannot be Huntress

And finally the headmaster of Beacon announces that every student a signal is now blacklisted
from Beacon. They cannot apply ever. We doesn't tell them to reality for some on probation for
like five years. If they're willing to work hard to make up for what they did you still get in

Course my prediction is probably a much more dark outcome to this

The writer hears at the pivotal point we go darker with the final conflict
begins the final conflict

The main thing to keep us reading is finding out where the writer goes.
And for me to see if my predictions even close to what happens

We shall see

Nice

I'm excited for Ruby to go to Beacon, she doesnt deserve the hate, the precious cinnamon roll.

And once again, you’re gonna let them get off Scott free. It’s really frustrating. I like the premise, but it’s incredibly obvious who was involved, and they could all easily be charged for assault, unlawful imprisonment, and kidnapping, but you’re not going to write that, and that hurts the immersion. It would be far better if your kept it to simple bullying.

Seriously? Gold just assaulted her, potentially Ben tried to murder her and she’s just letting it go? Hell, she didn’t even call for help!

You never said what the twins semblance’s are...

DISRESPECT YOUR SURROUNDINGS

Daaaamn Emilys a bitch

Please update soon. This is getting really interesting and i cant wait for the next chapter to find out what happens to ruby.

Ruby no!

Also question, after this story is done will you do a story of all of Signal guys reacting to everything that happens to Ruby and Beacon and all that?

Soo good. Please update soon.

There's still improper capitalization