Reviews for Unforseen
Me chapter 8 . 11/7/2019
Hey dude why aren't you uptodating? l'm tired of waiting. Please please please give me another chapter sooooooon
Sanicheh chapter 2 . 11/7/2019
Wow, my gosh. It is just great. Very well written . It is very hard to write a story like this. I'm so exited to see what will happen next. You wrote it so well that the reader doesn't want to stop. Good job.
Silver-IronScript chapter 8 . 8/18/2018
Keep it up! I wonder what will happen next
Silver-IronScript chapter 3 . 8/18/2018
I can totally see Bolin jumping around in excitement. He then runs to show his brother and everyone. I can see him smile at his brother after making fire for him to see.
Maran Zelde chapter 1 . 4/23/2018
You have my attention. Although, it doesn't make much sense for Korra to stay with Tenzin if she doesn't need to learn airbending, but maybe that will be addressed later in the story.
Geraze90 chapter 8 . 4/22/2018
Looks like Bolin has already mastered lightning bending... will he able to bend a lava as well? He’ll be the most powerful and versatile avatar if he can do that.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/3/2018
Me encanto,!
Bolinlover123 chapter 7 . 12/29/2017
I really like this so far! Good job!
Bolinlover123 chapter 6 . 12/2/2017
I really love your story here. I too have a AU in which Bolin is the Avatar and have a lot of headcannons and ideas about it.
That being said, I think you would greatly benefit form a beta reader. You have very nice ideas, but you have grammar mistakes and lack commas and such. You would benefit form going into more details with Bolin's thoughts.

I would love to give you ideas and be a beta refer for you if you'd like.
helena1205 chapter 5 . 11/26/2017
I love it and cant wait for the rest. I love Bolin-centric stories, espeicialy those who have a focus on the relationship between Mako and Bolin. Again, cant wait for the next chapter.
Geraze90 chapter 3 . 10/16/2017
Well as clueless as he is he's still a powerful bender even without avatar's power. Now he can firebend but I hope he won't stop there and can also do lightning bend. I guess Korra would his teacher for water bending then.
Well keep up the good work :)
JimKirk1 chapter 1 . 10/8/2017
You know, this is an actually well written and composed story.

Good start. You get my approval, and continue your work!
volfwildman chapter 1 . 10/8/2017
good stuff keep it up