It seems Galabatorix do not act just to see people suffer but because of his own sense of justice and maybe revenge.

It seems that despite his extensive knowledge of magic, he doens't know the existence of chakra.

I really love your idea of total control over space and time for Naruto, it creates so many possibilities, it's a vertiable trove for a writer.

The little scene between Naruto and Asura – formerly nameless – was absolutely beautiful! But I must also admit I became really irritated.

Naruto and Asura were having their first flight together, doing acrobatics, but Arya came in and demanded Naruto to stop. In what rights does she dares interrupt this kind of important scene for both of them. I know I may be somewhat biased against her, but I don't think I'll be able to overlook her actions from now on. At least, she had the decency to shut her mouth when Naruto and Asura got their other intimate moment, enjoying the view of the surroundings through Asura's eyes, sharing their feelings towards each others and finally Asura getting named by Naruto.

I loved this moment, I hope they'll have more of them from now on. And though I was never against Naruto following Naruto, for the first time I acknowledged him and accepted him.

Poor Dragon, I got afraid he gets a heart attack with all the revelations that were bumped on him about his rider without warning. I mean, finding out you bonded with the strongest being in the world could do that to anyone.

It scared me a little when Eragon mentioned he didn't know where to go once he killed the evil king. I thought maybe he'd end up traveling with Naruto holed up in his Kamui with all of the Eldunari. But then, I thought nope, since Naruto has chosen four dragons to bond with, it's unlikely he accepts all of the other dragons – and by proxy Eragon since I think he will stay with them – follow him.

I'm not sure wether that's canon or not, but most likely they found a little area they would build to become their new home, away from the civilization but close enough to help should another Galabatorix appear.

Now I come back to Arya like always. After this chapter I'll try to stop talking about her since by now you already know what I think about her and her relationship with Naruto.

There are a lot of points, but the main one lays here :

« Arya just stood there in shock as she, not for the first time, realized the huge difference in power between them as she not for the first time grew dejected…at least until Naruto wrapped his arms around her. [...] Knowing that due to her upbringing, Arya still had slight problems with being in an 'unequal' relationship... »

I think her fears are absolutely justified and are reasons enough to stop her relationship with Naruto. She's utterly weak and depends on Naruto to become stronger. She basically wants to be able to perform the same feats than Naruto but will always be a lesser version than him.

Some kind of diversity in terms of powers could have been interesting rather than just copying him, but it's already too late for their difference of strength is abysmal.

Of course, maybe for a short amount of time, she will stay better than him in terms of 'magic' and use of the Ancient Language, but it will only be that, temporary. I know it because of the greatest technique in existence, the shadow clones. Plus, since the Eldunari asked the knowledge of Galabatorix in exchange for the other three dragons, Naruto will most likely use the Human Path to extract and absorb the knowledge. That also means he will know a lot of words and techniques lost to the elven race and and thus Arya. And I guess, once again it will be him who teaches her the words she doesn't know, it will be him that makes her stronger. In the end, she will only be good enough to pursue his back without ever reaching him. The greatest proof she will never be able to become his equal is that the temporary advantage she has over him with the Ancient Language is already null and void since he know its name, he can trifle with it however he wants. The only way for her to even approach his level would be if he doesn't try, if he stops trying to better his understanding of the Ancient Language.

I stop here my disgression over Arya and will try to limit my opinions about her from now on.

That being said, since I talked a lot about Ancient Language and I didn't read the canon of Inheritance Cycle, I wonder if Naruto will ever meet the Gray People, the true creators, masters and owners of the language. I'd really like to see that.

Arya just makes me laugh. She added pretty wards around Naruto's Adamantine Sealing Chains like it would do anything. If whatever managed to break through Naruto's wards, she her own would do anything, against something Naruto who is the strongest being on the continent if not the planet could do nothing? Preposterous!

I know she only had good intents but that's just ridiculous. Who does she take herself for? She's barely chuunin level and she thinks she can take care of the business of the adults.

It's like when Naruto told her to prepare to flee and warn Oromis if something happened in the Vault but she prepared to jump in were something happening. Doesn't she understand how much of a deadweight she would be? Is she that stupid? I understand the love makes look everything doable but there's limits.

The more I read their relationship the more I hate Arya. It would have been better had they been simple friends with no feelings for each other.

I know I'm supposed to love and enjoy their relationship and their sweet love, but I just can't because she's too weak and even worse too easily affected by her emotions while being weak to be with him. I only think of that when reading and it weight me.

Besides that, I might love the little dragon. I look forward to see how he will evolve.

Full control of space/time, if that is not a cheat like power, then I don't know what is. But how I like that! Good job author-sama, you couldn't make me more happy.

I don't really see the interest of bonding with a dragon when he is that strong and has Kurama, I doubt they would be useful, but seeing as it seems to be a lengendary egg, I'll give him a chance.

I very much enjoyed the interaction between the three siblings eggs. It was so cute.

There was a lot of posturing, I like that!

And now Naruto even wants to tell Arya of his secrets, or his Rinne-Sharingan abilities. You would think as a Shinobi he would have learned not to reveal them, but no he still does it. And he intends to tell her even more.

All of his love his clouding his judgment and I really can't stand all of this romance and this mushy mushy atmosphere anymore. I hope it will stop soon.

You do are aware that if Naruto wasn't there and Arya had went into the vault alone, all of her memories, her secrets and by proxy Naruto's secrets had she known more would have been revealed to a potential enemy. Here it's good since Naruto was here to protect her and they weren't really enemies.

But the day she comes accross a strong enemy that will be able to break her mind easily and find out everything about Naruto it will be too late! And it would be a tragedy if she knew his true name. Plus, no matter how I see it she acts too much upon her emotions and do not think about the consequences. Her asking constantly about Naruto's past and his secrets is the only proof I need to know she's not worthy of him. She's just a liabilty, a risk and a burden for him.

That aside, the Dragon bit more than they could chew it seems :D

Phew, they are really talented these Eldunari. Their knowledge of the mind maybe even surpass the Yamanaka clan. I'm not sure, but maybe and even reaching a maybe is a feat worth mentioning.

I never liked when the MC is whipped by his girlfriend. Why do a lot of the manga, novels or fics present the MC as if they're afraid from their partner when more often than not they are tens, hundred or even thousand times stronger? And here, clearly Naruto is so mcuh stronger than her that she's not even an ant in his eyes in terms of power. That's really annoying!

Honestly, I really love the plot of this fic but this pairing will be the end of me. It's to a point I hope Arya will just die, never to be resuscitated.

If it wasn't because I'm totally against NaruArya and that I refuse he gives him his true name, I find the pacing of the romance perfect. Honestly, it's very well written, you don't have to worry about that I think.

Still, like I said, as far as I'm concerned she's too weak to truly be with him, to know his name or his secrets. She may become a liability in the future and I don't like that.

It isn't really true with Eragon since his true name has no thing that should really ashame him, aside from wanting more than a normal life. But heh, wanting greatness isn't something you should be ashamed of.

However, with the true name of Naruto, I understand how some people can reach insanity. If Naruto was a lesser man, admitting he would choose his precious people over a greater number of innocent people isn't something you can easily come to face with.

That was tragic. Eragon completely lost himself in this alternate past, in this forged memory. But how could he not? Seeing your family, your friends getting slaughtered like livestock would do that to everyone.

But Tsukuyomi is much more overkill than I thought it was. The memories obviously weren't created by Naruto but by the subconscious of the target. And that is much more terrific than anything Naruto could thought off.

That's a pretty powerful spell to target anyone pronoucing a mere word in the entirety of the continent.

Naruto casually creates a summon. A normal day in Naruto's life.

I'm not sure what adding the word 'chakra' to the ancient language had to do with his name. I doubt his true name is 'chakra'.

And it's a pity he didn't tell us both his true name and the true name of the Ancient Language.

I just hope he won't be so stupid as to tell his true name to the elf princess, because I'm not sure I could forgive him for that.

By the way, I forgot to mention it in the last chapter, but it's good you made a mention of Claymore with Priscilla. Though I'm sad it isn't in the time of Teresa but in the present. A pity... But then again, without that we wouldn't have our favorite character Raki.

Does that mean that we come near to the end of the arc Inheritance Cycle? I wonder...

However I wonder who was the girl with white eyes and red eyes, I don't remember her in Claymore.