Oooo exciting

So the sight of the uchiha crying caused him to freeze up, huh? I'd imagine much like when Sasuke saw it after the massacre, but dismissed it due to the trauma. And I did love how Osaki threw all the things Sasuke has DONE to Naruto back in face, just to prove how weak his words really were.

I really like your story, although a few mistakes and mixed up sentences make me stumble sometimes. But plot and pacing are very good and exciting. I'm looking forward for more.

omg irs totaly a great read ! irs been awhile a giod fic pop out ! all mystry and suspend I love it

This is off to a good start!