*Chuckles* Brick Nye...

Garmadon and Morro's low five! :D Loved that.
SO WHAT DID I THINK OF THE STORY?!
I am an action kinda girl. I like stuff happening. I like mystery. I like adventure! This didn't really seem to have a proper plot (but then, in my mind Anne of Green Gables doesn't have a proper plot, and that's a classic.) My favourite part by far was the exciting chapters at the end. Action! Tension! Yay! I also liked parts that drew out emotion, like flashbacks with Zane, or mentions of Lloyd (my smol bean!)
All the shopping and talking and cooking didn't really entice me. If I had written this story, I would have-
WHO CARES WHAT I WOULD HAVE DONE! OF COURSE I WOULD WRITE IT DIFFERENT, NO ONE WRITES THE SAME STORY!
Enough of my criticism!
There were a lot of things in this story that made me laugh, and more that made me smile. :) As I mentioned, the end was great. My family couldn't steal my attention from that. The grammar and spelling were on point, the description was far from lacking, you had some truly poetic and beautiful chunks, such as 'Tick Tock, Tick Tock," and plenty of good puns and references. :) And don't forget the extremely clever name of the story! I'm glad someone puts effort into their title and summary.

It's been a pleasure talking to you and reading your work! You will definitely see me invading your comment sections again soon! :)

Ok, I tried to take a break to watch something funny with my sisters but I just COULDN'T. I'm too tense from the last chapter!
omg omg I am hyperventilating and I can no longer communicate with my family aaaaaaaaahhh!

I was NOT expecting this much action! And when I saw Cole-COLE!-all the wind was knocked out of me! This chapter! This chapter!

Tick tock. Tick tock.
EVERY time I read that... it just feels so amazing! I don't know why!

Owen is so cute. This isn't the first fic I have seen where Morro 'adopts' someone.
The imagery of the lanterns floating up through the ground and to the tree is beautiful. I can't wait to see that scene!

Wow! What an argument! And that line: "...I should know, I've been inside his head." Chilling!

So many references! :D

When Garmadon said, "Aaaaaah," I think I laughed out loud! XD Also, "Dead. Do you think she's dead yet?" Is quite a way to put it. I like it! XD

This is by far my favourite chapter now! I enjoyed it from beginning to end. Super intriguing, and I can't wait to see more of Zane!

I thought this was a bit over dramatic, the way he found out about her leaving and the way he reacted, but I really liked the Borg cameo! :)
(Sorry for my blunt review. Watched and read some other stuff that put me in a mood.)

Careful Morro! If you add too many new ingredients, you'll ending cooking like Cole! :D
My critiques: I feel the characters are acting younger and more awkward than they would in the show. Morro could be wittier, Garmadon wiser. Julian seemed super awkward in this chapter, which didn't seem in character for him.
Moby Brick! XD That made me smirk. :P

Ok, I don't care what I say or anyone else says: That high five was golden!
And hey! I'm looking forward to the part when DOTD rolls around!

Wow. When Morro blurted out Wu's teaching style I froze. And when you went on to give examples of Wu making his students learn on their own without a teacher...
Why are the Ninja so close to Wu, again?
Reading this story, I thought the characters were a tad OOC in a few spots, but I'm still enjoying it.

Honestly, the whole kite flying thing seemed so random the second I heard it, but it didn't stop me from smiling.
Garmadon smacking Morro with the kite at the end! XD

Departed Fashions! XD
Ok, I accidently spit all over my laptop screen laughing at 'died in your sleep?' and 'gave my robes to my son and didn't have time to go shopping before I drowned'. XD

Neat chapter. It's cool to see the Departed Realm fleshed out, since we don't know what it's actually like in the show.
Also, if you want critiques on anything, feel free to mention it to me. I inwardly critique everything I read. :)
I'm on to the next chapter!