Sorry for not reviewing earlier, but I’ve just binged read your wonderful story and I couldn’t stop reading. Thank you so much for all the hard work you’ve put in this epic, fantastic tale. I loved it and I’m sad it’s over.

I loved all the angst, so well written, the absolute love between Jon and Dany, so beautifully rendered, the plot was brilliant. I particularly loved how you described their inner thoughts, their insecurities and their struggles, their deep feelings. I loved the bond between Jon and Rhaegal. Loved that each of their children have different personalities, but still have parts of both their parents.

In the epilogue, I would just have liked a bit more details on how the war ended and it’s consequences (Dorne is now part of the kingdom I guess, what about Essos, etc.. ) but other than that I wouldn’t change a line.

It’s one of the best Jonerys stories I’ve read so far and I’m surprised that it’s not gotten more recognition. THANK YOU !

PS: I would suggest a short sequel or long épilogue to see the kids grow, would they all get a dragon and / or a dire wolf ?

I like how Jon was completely forgotten, cause fuck him he’s expendable. Cunt

You are lazy to write “4” Instead of “four”. It is horrible practice of proper grammar jackass

Really enjoyed the story, keep up the hard work

Agh, emotions. Looks great! Looking forward to reading further. I wonder how Daenerys was hurt. Probably going to find it soon.

when you said the targaryens were finally together again, it somehow sounded like the kardashians, completely ruining the mood.

Loved it! Please do another Jonerys story!

Oh dear God, this is f-ing awesome! Dragonbattle! Did Jon just become the unburnt while also warging with Rhaegal.

Well shit, this was unexpected. This guy needs to die, and since he can't burn - perhaps death by ice.
As the union of ice and fire, Jon needs some kind of special power

That fight was epic!

So useful for a ruler to have dragons at her command. Allows your threats to be far more intimidating

That was a good chapter :D

I like the idea of the story, but I think you are overly vague about what the King “should be doing” and “what the king isn’t”. It sounds like empty gossip rather than factual discussion. Not to mention it’s unclear what the king is being criticized for- one can only assume it’s for the betrothal of his son- but if I remember correctly, not even Joffrey had such an arrangement till his teen years so why is it so important now?

Also I think Jon would deal with comas better after the whole Bran ordeal. Just saying.

Sorry for not reviewing before now, wanted to wait until I had time to read the whole story in one go so I could get the full immersion.
Was fantastic to read it all at once, so many things from the beginning linked up, particularly Jaehaerys’ dreams. So much angst and detail and love and intrigue. You can bet this is on my ‘read a million times’ list. Congratulation on a wonderful story, I’m so thrilled I got to see it come together piece by piece.
My poor partner when I was reading this was pretty fed up because I kept interrupting him to rant about Arianne Martell or Jamie Lannister or Arianne Martell or Jamie Lannister or Arianne Martell or... I think you get the picture. But you permanently put them both on my hit list, so congrats for that as well.
Love thick last chapter, both Dany and Jon seem much more free and they’re working as a cohesive unit which I love! Them ruling together as equals really makes me happy.
Good to see Rhaegal is still mostly okay and the bond between him and Jon is so sweet, especially the bits about Jon seeking his mind when he was out. So precious!
Love that Arya and Gendry got together, that’s probably my favourite side ship and Gendtbaccepts Arya wholeheartedly.
In the last chapter the dornish army were at the gates of kings landing. Can you confirm my suspicion that they started faking Jon and Gendry out with their retreating and were really preparing to march to the capital?
Seems like they’re in the fold now, dos house Martell have to change Thor house words or did you decide on another lord/lady to rule Dorne?
Also it’s evident with their 4 kids with one on the way that Jon and Dany can’t keep their hands off each other, was glad to see that in this epilogue as well!
Glad to see on the bottom of this that you’re maybe planning another jonerys story, can’t wait to hear more on that, but for now I’ll content myself with your ao3 kimillia one.
Ps on that, you’ve been hinting that they’re be a rose thing happening there (ugh but I’ll forgove you, even though I can’t realky seeing the kit you’ve written going there) will that be in the first verse time line or the second part of the series? Or between and we have happy ending with first verse and the second part is the getting back together after the rose fiasco? I’d you could give me a hint or more so I can retain what’s left of my sanity due to angst, id greatly appreciate it! Even if it’s just to warn me when it’s about to get bad.
Okay I think I’m done now, Look forward to easing more of your stuff! Keep up the fabulous work!

Great story! Wish there were more like this one!