This was truly beautiful! Thank you for writing it.

This was beautifully written. Though the chapters were short, everything was just pieced together so well and I was sent on an emotional rollercoaster.

Absolutely amazing, well written. Literally I was wishing there was more to the story! It left me wanting more! Kudos.

Wow, this made me sad

Beautiful ending to this story. I think you captured the scene between Rose and Leah to perfection with Leah understanding how Rose feels. Which she needed to hear. There were so many great lines in this chapter but my favorite was when Leah said she loved herself more. In your authors note you need mentioned writing a Leah story. I would totally be interested in reading that. Normally I don’t read Leah focused stories, but given your portrayal of her this chapter, I would be a follower on that story :)

I look forward to the conclusion. I really liked reading Roselie’s POV and Emmett’s was sad...very intrigued to see you’re planned ending for this shorty story. These chapters are short but impactful :)

I loved Emmett's description of the girl! I almost changed sides, haha. Please write more of his point of view! As much as I love drama/hurt feelings I love Emmett x Rosalie way more, so please be kind to my heart.

Kinda out of character for Rosalie to kill humans? I see her more as a loner, hiding from everyone on her "grief"

Ahh! I only wish their argument lasted longer, haha. From Rosalie to tell everything to Emmett, her feelings...

Amazing work! I love how the character notices the small things on the others, in this case Emmett falling apart from Rosalie

I absolutely loved it! I like the way it is written, so mature and Rosalie's point of view I feel like it's happening to me, haha

You make me hate Emmett, I never think that could be possible.
I love and I hate this, but I'm adiccted.
You make me feel everything, even Emmett's emotions in this moment in my life I'm in love so I can feel the two sides of the story and I hate it/I love it. It's been months since I feel something so close to me like this, so thank you.
Continue writting, You'll be in my alerts.

(sorry for my english btw)

This is amazing, please keep destroying my heart

I really love how she comes to learn about herself, and also how you tell the story. You wrap her words in such a marvelous way in so we can understand how she feels sad and yet angry at the same time. I hope Rosalie also finds other good things about herself in this time of sadness. Maybe she could find someone that brings out the best in her later on in the story. I wouldn't want her to be all alone and spiteful but alas it is your story. I trust you will continue it on in the way you think it should be. I'm excited to see how it goes.

I hope Jacob comes and tears Emmett Limb from Limb and I sincerely hope that Jasper and Edward help because Rosalie deserves a King. Not some Court Jester.

I'm very much anticipating the next chapter