God damnit This was a good story premise

Interesting. So far the story has got my attention, looking forward to reading more.

Well I'm intrigued by this one. What'll happen next

i see the redo of that one story and its much sadder as we get some thing that happened before hand

What's with all the bowing? Are you going for a traditional Japanese feel?

It would be intresting if jaune meets Weiss and she takes up a sisterly role since it’s implied that multiple famaly members of hers have been killed by the white fang so she could look to take a similar role to what her sister is for her but for Simone who went through something similar. I wonder how blaje is going to feel and how her parents are going to react to this. Where was jaune shot if it was on a limb is he going to have a impediment or cybernetics or if not is he going to have notable scaring. This seems like an intresting start I do hope you come out with more soon.

Interesting beginning, i'm curious to see how will be the Jaune thath will come to Beacon. Keep up the good work and see you later.

I like it. The plot is interesting and I want to see what you do with it.

man this is so awesome i love how as soon as jaune felt comfortable you killed his family.I got high hopes for this fic also can you make jaune cool and give him semblance like grays ice make magic

man this is so awesome i love how as soon as jaune felt comfortable you killed his family.I got high hopes for this fic also can you make jaune cool and give him semblance like grays ice make magic

Hoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooly CRAP!
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I LOVE THIS SO FAR! This took a way darker turn than I thought. Looking forward to more of this story, mainly cause there isn't enough Knightshade here.