The eldest sister is named Saffron

Galen Marek... getting bullied into crossdressing... because they gave him puppy eyes.

Been a very interesting read up to the end at chapter six.
I do hope you continue this story in the future.
No need to rely on the canon plot of RWBY too much either...

It does seem a shame you dont see more fanfics with Galen Marek and his kind crossed over. Great potential there given how young he is, how much room there is to develop his character and use him to shake a world up.
I looks lile you havent worked on this short fic for a while but I am certain I will enjoy it none the less.
Your more recent Overlord crossover showed you have a good grasp of writing, and I can see those skills here as well.

pls continue this

I honestly don't know why quite a number of people liked this story, I mean RWBY fandom is popular and crowd here is not very picky, but even considering that story is written pretty yearly, when we didn't knew all that stuff we knew about Remnant, it's just plainly bad. Qrow, Ruby and Galek too OOC, blatant lack of research of setting and starting from chapter 3 there is way too many attempts to humor based only gay and trans jokes and bulling. Some people enjoy other people or character suffering but majority is not. At least not without reason.
While idea of controlling mother and abusive sisters have some merit and was able to fit into canon with minor work, I just can't stop cringing.

Yours Beyond the World Tree is a good story, not without cringeworthy moments, but the difference is how they fit into Setting, and actually play the role in the story working as smart limiter. But here you just made complete looser from Galek.

Eh nevermind mind not my thing I see all this pushing a lot of readers away they want starkiller not blonde retard... I don't like jaunes character at all worst one in RWBY in my opinion don't get what people like about the guy

Only thing I don't like is that you're using light starkiller which sucked in my opinion damn hippie Jedi's

Nice

yes, starkiller not jaune.

Hi please update.

Please update this! Play The Force Unleashed to get your groove back if it helps. I hate seeing such a good story abandoned like this.

honestly you make it hard to call that a family relationship the only feeling I got was this a woman blackmailing her brother cuz she's a bitch despite everything you did that's just how it comes across

I want starkiller no jaune ..

eyy this is a really good galen fic. im surprised i havent seen this a long time ago. hope you'll get to update this it's really good.