Reviews for M to the X Phase 1: The Darkest Star
Lordlexx chapter 1 . 3/23
Oh good god the constant switching of pronouns and Harry and Melania's names got headache inducing... What made you think that was a good idea?
MikeL59 chapter 4 . 1/4
I just re-read this story for the umpteenth time; just as good as the first time! Hope you can get back to it at some point when life and/or your muse permits.
Seraphy64 chapter 2 . 11/20/2019
Come from a new dimension and already being bound into service? And they just let it haooeb? Passing on this fic. With the implied power at their disposal I can't see them as servents. To crown or otherwise.
tvanscoy5 chapter 4 . 10/29/2019
more?
chaoswizard chapter 4 . 9/18/2019
Keep it coming plz it is good
DraconisIgnis07 chapter 4 . 8/20/2019
UPDATE

That means, "GET THE FUCK UP"
kenbre chapter 4 . 8/17/2019
Great fic hope you find time to continue it
Have a Little Feith chapter 4 . 3/15/2019
I have one big beef with your wording of the AN at the end. That’s with the past tense of “beat”. The past tense of beat is “beat”, not “bet”. To “bet” is to make a gamble. I could’ve been an English major, if it weren’t for the fact that degrees cost more money than I’m willing to spend for schooling, and I’m also lazy/a procrastinator of the highest degree. I also have ADHD, and can’t focus at all when my meds wear off.

Anyways, this was an interesting story, so far. Though I do hope it updates soon, as it’s been a year, if I’m recalling the story’s last update date correctly. It’s hard to check that on mobile without deleting the entirety of this review.
alertpoet91 chapter 4 . 3/1/2019
Fantastic story so far!
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 4 . 2/21/2019
A great story here so far!
Con Weird chapter 4 . 2/5/2019
I loved it! I'm a major fan of Son of Potter, Daughter of Black, but this is really good too. I didn't read it until today because you updated your story ideas fic, so I got curious about whether SPDB was updated as well. Alas, no, but I do hope you feel better soon. Your stories are phenomenal and I can't wait to read more ()
Jose19 chapter 2 . 1/25/2019
The Living Tribunal being mentioned safeguards the entire reality, and his power is very vast if he feels that Harry is a threat than he will erase him from existence no question asked since he is above Death, and all cosmic beings.
Jose19 chapter 1 . 1/25/2019
I want to say this being associated with Mistress Death is the same as being a Henious villain since she has a relationship with Thanos who is more powerful than Harry.

The Cosmic beings in Marvel can easily beat Harry even with this power of his.
feauxen chapter 4 . 11/18/2018
I love it. This world has so many moving parts, and so far they're all moving in all the right ways. Keep up the good work!
Black Magic99 chapter 3 . 11/10/2018
you still alive?
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