you're doing great please keep it up. I would love to see Ron or Ginny get a legendary pokemon.

Pokedex order including Pichu, Pikachu, and Raichu:
1: Pichu
2: Pikablu
3: Plantchu
4: Pyrochu
5: Pikachu
6: Bluchu
7: Raichu
8: Raiblu
9: Sharkchu
10: Dracochu
11: Dragochu
I wanted to clear that up in case you were going to use this. I would have PMed you but you didn't send me a message back about it.

Still love your fic though.

I'm disgusted at the first part of this, not cause of the writing, it's wonderfully written, but because, Umbridge.

Was there an equivalent of the British empire for Avalon where at it’s peaked was over a quarter of the world and orbit was how they did go from that to what ever the hell they are right now in 70 years

Wow. This is the most disgusting thing I've seen all week.
Well done.

And now we're up to date! This is going to be wild!

Though the trip into Umbridge's mind makes me feel like I need a shower...

When you thought Umbridge couldn't get any cuddlier...lol. Another Muy Bueno chapter, with another brill reference by Luna. Keep em coming oh Mister of Chaos.

The-flirtatiously-innocent-bag-of-coco-pudding-that-is,

GrinDLmania.

AUGH! IT BURNSES ME! THE MIND OF THE PINK BITCH BURNSES ME!

Nice job bringing it back to the events of the first chapter. And a little insight to the mind of an ugly, pink toad.

I've been waiting for the story to come full circle. Now that it has, I have to wonder if Harry is even RIGHT about his suspicions. Canonically, the end of fifth year was a trap that cost Harry his godfather. If this is meant to parallel the Battle of the Department of Mysteries, then I have a feeling something is about to go horribly wrong.

The mind of Umbridge... now that's a rabbit hole I could do without going down

Also as a history major let me say that her idea of history really gets on my nerves... yeah a few things are fact that are a little hard to debate but so much of history is up for debate... why did Hannibal chose to go over the Alps and why didn't he besiege Rome and why didn't Carthage give him more support... me and my friends could have discussions for hours over topics like that and it was fun and got you to think.

And rant aside now we're back to the beginning

You do not miss my good man

What a wonderful chapter describing the process of a characters point of view

After that glimpse into Umbridge’s mind I definitely need a shower. In fact I need ALL the showers.

Keep up the good work!

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

Another amazing chapter
Good job man

love this series! It's brilliant!