So now more of the truth is coming to light for Severus. Will he touch the paradox?

Fascinating turn of events! I’m really enjoying this and I love when Severus is paternal toward Harry. This is keeping my attention, can’t wait for the next chapter.

Oops!

Nice chapter! Can't wait to read the next chapter

So did Hermione just get sent back to her foster home after the trip to the zoo? The adults all knew how unhappy and poorly treated she was, so didn’t they place her elsewhere? I thought maybe the Snape’s would take her in.

Prefects have the power to take points? If I remember right, they only had that power under Dolores Umbridge and her many Educational Decrees though, right?

This is super wonderful! I love how the kids are being mean and nasty kids, but still have the remembrall fight. Can’t wait to see what happens when Snape catches them instead of McGonagall. Thanks for the new chapter. Good luck with your move.

Well at least James is in trouble also.

Why do you do this?! Argh!
I'm the first to admit that I end on cliffhangers regularly but if I need to wait another... how much time passed again? I will be devastated. I admit that I sort of forgot a lot of things already. For instance, I can't for the life of me remember why Lily is teaching potions instead of Snape. But I don't want to reread everything again.

Anyway! While I like your writing, as I always do, I feel that not a lot of things happened in this chapter. Yes, the final thing was exciting but that ended on a cliffhanger! Snape is going to be soooo furious with Harry. I doubt he'll be playing Quidditch now. A shame, really, because it might strengthen his relationships in Gryffindor.

I love the new assertive Neville. He rocks.

And that's kind of all I have to say, I guess.
Please, please update soon!

MS

Oh my! You cannot leave it there, I have to see how this goes down! I like how you handled Lupin’s first class, what a way to get that whole situation taken care of. And the friendships in this chapter, so enjoyed it. Draco borrowing Hermione’s a word a day calendar just to make other people feel dumb is so. Draco thing to do, yet also very unique. Thanks for a great update.

Thanks for the update.

I so love all the boys and really can’t wait to see them all sorted! But, oh my goodness! That last line was truly a kicker! Morfin Gaunt! I love what you’ve done with everyone and the timeline! Very exciting.

Very good. I hope you update soon.

Oh life will be different this time around. And instead of Severus vs James it will be Harry vs James Jr.

There's not much I think I'd like to critique this chapter. I suppose I would really like to see and hear more from Lily, just to a feel for her more and how she is taking everything. However, I understand extremely well there is only so much you can focus on at a time and that some characters will have to be pushed to the wayside once in a while.
This was interesting. The way Harry and Ron tried so hard to make the time-turner not be a time-turner in the eyes of Severus and Lily was kind of funny but also had me rolling my eyes a little. They obviously are very smart adults who aren't going to just be tricked like that.
The way Albus told his side of things and what happened I really liked too. I enjoyed finding out how he tricked the kids basically by letting them think they could obliviate him and keep him from meddling too much. Albus of course is much too clever to let that them do that to him.
The outrage Severus felt at hearing about the potion the kids were given and the effects were interesting. I'm very curious to see if they will be negatively impacted by the potion and it's just not come up yet or if they've gotten lucky and avoided that.
I really enjoyed the way Albus crafted his story to make it sound like Severus was Harry's dad even if his other life. It was almost kind of him. Though, it does bring into question if what exactly is his motive with that. Does he still not get along with James? Is he afraid that Severus knowing Harry wasn't his in a different life will effect the way Severus sees and treats him?
I guess in the end it doesn't really matter. Harry let the cat out of the bag. I'm very interested to see how that's going to go over!
There was this one grammatical thing you may just want to look at:
"Albus waved his wand elegantly and provided the room with beverages something that Severus ignored."
So, this sentence read just a little, slurred?, to me. I think a comma after "beverages" would be a good idea.