uadate soon

Great Story!

Here's hoping you update this someday. *remembers when she was excited to see the updates from this story* Not to nag at you or anything, but it has been a few umm.. years. P

Good luck with your other story as well. Maybe someday... *waves*

~aradow

what about hitomi's memories! . finish it plz!

please update soon

love the twist that has been made

please please do the next chapter soon need to know whats gonna happen

I thought you presented Hitomi and Van's relationship well but her memory loss makes things very awkward. It's still an interesting twist though. I'd like to find out more about this mysterious disease that changes people and it's origin. I hope Hitomi starts to remember something, anything at all. It seems weird that she can remember her parents but she can't even remember the first time she came to Gaea. It's all so bizarre, like someone pinpointed which memories of hers to erase without ever comming to the Mystic Moon to do so. I hope all of this is explained in future chapters. Keep up the good work, I look forward to the next chapter!

Okay I read that you want constructive criticism.

So farm I've just skimmed over the story so I really didn't notice any major grammatical errors. I didn't notice anything tehcnical period. What I noticed is the *.

The asterisk bothers me. I don't why. It just doesn't seem right for it to be there. I have yet to read a book that uses asterisks as the divider. It just takes away the attention.

Also, the brief division of paragraphs... Like this one:

*

blah blah blah blah

"I can't see the future" blah blah

*

blah blah blah... *really long narration of scenes

*

Did you get it? After a long narration, divider comes, then short narration. I don't know why, it just bothers me. Also, if you don't mind, a longer chapter per update would be much more likeable since this is on hold.

This is on hold... Right.

I'm happy that I read this fic. Really. At first, I was skeptical because of the number of reviews and the first chapter. (In this fandom, I prejudge a fic by the number of its reviews or summary. Good thing, I prejudged it by the summary.) Really interesting take on the story. Most post-series fanfiction will often have the same plot. Yours is refreshing (I don't know if there's another fanfiction with the same take). Good job. It saddens me, though, that this is on hold because there seems to be so much potential. Actually, if there would be an official Escaflowne continuation, your idea seems plausible enough to be used as is (the Hitomi goes back to Gaea because she wants to and a problem suddenly arises is so stale; this is better). The plot retains the mystery that the series had. I do hope that you'd continue this because few fanfiction in the fandom are continued and few are even good. Possibly, the reason for the few fanfiction is that the series did a good job of closing all ends; there is no story to tell anymore.

I hope you wouldn't be daunted by your number of reviews. If I may say so, the story has potential (I think I said it earlier). I think it was the first parts that are too boring and angsty that one may think that the story is an AU. Good thing I persevered and read on.

I have to say that I like you because you like Escaflowne. Oh, and I like you because I like your fanfiction. :D I like you because your favorites consist of Escaflowne.

Good luck with your school and writing. I hope you'd continue this one despite the possibility of it becoming an epic. Do not worry; it would be an enjoyable epic to read anyway. :D

good story so far. update soon.

I ve just read the story! are you going to update the story? Because I love it!

that was awsome! I love it! Are you going to update soon?

Nicely done, but *whines* why aren't you continuing...? We gotta see Hitomi recover her feelings for Van - if not her whole memory - soon, you know... 3

Better and better. I can't wait for more.

i really like the setup here, hitomi having to get reaquainted w/ gaia and w/ everyone. i loved her and van riding on the horse together (when she burst out w/ "what was our relationship?" hehe).
i think the saddest thing, though, is that it appears to be almost a year since this story has been updated, so i fear it has been abandoned :( say it isn't so!