I NEED MORE, YOU HAD SOMETHING MAN

OH MY GOOOOOOOOOD

First things first, I really like the premise of this fanfic. I enjoy Jojo and Persona so the recent run of JojoXPersona crossovers that P5 caused pleaded me greatly. Reading the first chapter brought concerns that you would just be retreading the story of Persona 5, this recent chapter has gone a long way in alleviating my concerns, but has also raised more questions than it has answered. How does ripple function in this story? Is there a difference between stands and personas? Does the existence of vampires (and possibly Pillar Men?) mean that the changing hearts and the Metaverse will be a secondary concern? You have my interest, so keep going and let’s see what happens!

Hoh? An early visit to the otherside? Is there any lasting effects from it I wonder.
And so one of the first partial divergences from canon appear...

I guess Joseph won't have strong start like his canon self already knowing how to use hamon. I want to ask though are regular persona move still there? Are personas going to be more like a stand?

Good chapter and thought the whole fight with Straizo went great. Looks like Ceasar knows about the otherworld rather than Joseph which is nice. There are two grammar errors I picked up from this chapter. When Sojiro talks to Joseph during the line "I get it, you a kid who hates where they are but Speedwagon had to pull a lot of strings to get you here." The word "you" should be "you're". Another one would be during the conversation with the principle of the school. "Right of course. I'm . I'm the principle here, it nice to meet you Joestar." What he should be saying is "Right of course. I'm the principle here, it's nice to meet you Joestar." I thought changing stands into persona is a neat idea and wonder if Joseph will be able to use different stand abilities. Keep it up!

Just finished reading this chapter and I have to say it's a good start for a story. There was a tiny grammar error but otherwise than that it had no grammar or typo errors from what I've seen. With Joseph being the MC of this story I'm hoping to see a deviant change from Person 5 story. You managed to nail his personality and mannerisms as close as you can with him. From what I can gleam it seems Hermit Purple is a stand and he has his ham to add that extra kick. With future battles I would recommend having Joseph use his wits more than his persona kinda like part 2 battles. Overall for a first story it's quite impressive and looking forward to more of this story. Keep it up!

I'm really liking the story so far. Can't wait to see how a Joestar can change the way of the original
story.

Not enough change to the canon plot of Persona 5 to gain the maximum of praise.
Like, guys... there is something called 'Originality', otherwise known as 'Not reusing the same crap from the game over and over again', so just stop. Fuck's sake. How many months the game got out ? And how much stories do we have with the same 'Joker got captured and beaten up and co' ?
I can only hope than an author can understand that and pull something original.

Otherwise and in other words, the idea is awesome, but the aplication need work.
You perfectly got Joseph's personality though, and I love it.

Great work keep it up my dude

your English is good hope you do well.

I hope that this actually takes off! You have me really looking forward to more you know?
I wonder how Caesar gets involved though! As well as anyone else, like Stroheim.

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For your first story, it's actually not bad. Keep it up.

Dude Joseph with Persona... I am glad this exists. Along with the 'next your going to say' lines. I am going to favorite this. And I have to ask will Joseph be able to use other stands when he gets social links maxed out to an '11' out 10. Because seeing him use Star Platinum on Shido would be fucking cool especially with heat riser on.